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TangyChili

TangyChili

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2019-06-03 JoinedNicaragua
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  • TangyChili
    TangyChili1yr
    Replied to AcOu0KinG

    ohhh ok thanks for clearing that up.

    Ch 9 Chapter 9 : Kiriko X Navigator X Test
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    HUNTER : The Man at The Top Of The Food Chain
    Anime & Comics · AcOu0KinG
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  • TangyChili
    TangyChili1yr
    Commented

    so can he eat more DFs since he's immortal?

    Ch 9 Chapter 9 : Kiriko X Navigator X Test
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    HUNTER : The Man at The Top Of The Food Chain
    Anime & Comics · AcOu0KinG
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  • TangyChili
    TangyChili1yr
    Replied to Taddena

    Mmmm, I don't know man, you can't fault me for saying it's a generic fanfic and you know it is. Also, I've read many MTLs I can stand reading them despite translation quality, but the fact that the mc is called "the clan" is such a big turn off. It may seem little but names are very important and especially when it's the mc. Other character's names although translated badly I can still get through context, but the mc is an oc. Like maybe you could change the name to something else that sounds like a proper name. However, I don't enjoy reading it with his name like so.

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    Douluo’s Stealing the Ten Thousand Realms System!
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  • TangyChili
    TangyChili1yr
    Replied to Taddena

    so like are you the author or translator or something? why would my feedback matter to you? btw, I know my phrasing sound very aggressive through text so I'm sorry for that, but I genuinely curious

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    Douluo’s Stealing the Ten Thousand Realms System!
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  • TangyChili
    TangyChili1yr
    Replied to Taddena

    wait, when was this mentioned? I got to chap 9 before dropping it, I guess I missed it so mb on that.

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    Douluo’s Stealing the Ten Thousand Realms System!
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  • TangyChili
    TangyChili1yr
    Posted

    I dont know how anyone can stand to read this MTL. First of all, the mc of the novel is called "the clan" like that no uppercase no nothing so you get confused reading it. That alone should stop at least 95% of readers, including the few who can stand reading MTLs daily like me. Plus, the story ain't even that good, it's just a generic Chinese DD fanfic where the mc likes to shit on Tang San. The system allows him to steal things and abilities/powers from any universe I think. Additionally, the system has this "hate" points system thingy that even the translator left a TN saying that it doesn't add much to the plot. Also, when the mc steals something from someone, they somehow know that it's the mc who stole it with no explanation. TL;DR just don't read it, even if you're desperate.

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    Douluo’s Stealing the Ten Thousand Realms System!
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  • TangyChili
    TangyChili1yr
    Commented

    :)

    Ch 12 Changes To The Novel: NOT A CHAPTER
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    Otaku In The Animverse As Shallot
    Anime & Comics · WeAnoz
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  • TangyChili
    TangyChili1yr
    Replied to WeAnoz

    can you give me your discord? (username and code)

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    Otaku In The Animverse As Shallot
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  • TangyChili
    TangyChili1yr
    Posted

    Writing Quality: 1 Stability: 5 Story development: 2 Character design: 3 World Background: 3 So, my computer got fucked and the review I was writing got deleted and I can't be bothered to write it all again so I'll summarize it. Writing quality is just bad. Poor vocabulary from the autho, which I'm assuming will be excused by something along the lines of "english isn't my first language" so whatever I guess. The dialogue in the story is the biggest turn-off ever. It's like reading a conversation in a roleplaying discord server or something. Momo: *blushes* Lucifer: *goes in for a handshake* The story development is also disappointing. The MHA arc can basically be summarized as: MC gets OP, shows off, gets girl, leaves world. Another complaint I have is why tf does the MC make a JARVIS for himself. He can literally will any skill/ability into existence, but instead makes JARVIS make the power. Why? "Hey JARVIS, make X skill for me." ????????? what's the point. Why does he need a middle man to make the skills for him. Omnificence doesn't even require the user to have to understand the intricacies of the skill he's making Anyway, next he goes to the Solo Leveling world. Now take what I'm about to say with a grain of salt because we're only one chapter in the arc atm. Why doesn't he take Momo out with him? why leave her in his pocket dimension? why does he not give her any powers and instead gives one to Izuku? Why does he simp more for Izuku than his actual girlfriend? talking about Momo, MC never went to visit her parents and he just takes her to another world. Momo herself, seems to not have any attachment to her family and just leaves with MC without a second thought. However, as I mentioned before, we're only a chapter in so maybe my questions will be answered, but honestly, at this point, it could probably go towards the pokemon waifu route.

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    Otaku In The Animverse As Shallot
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  • TangyChili
    TangyChili1yr
    Commented

    Good chapter, I'm really liking the cooking scenes so keep doing those. Maybe in the future, he can have a rivalry with Sanji. Btw, where are we in the OP timeline?

    Ch 7 Ranch expansions
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    Just Rancher trying to Live his Life
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  • TangyChili
    TangyChili1yr
    Commented

    bruh this is actually paedophilia

    Ch 32 Don't worry, We Beasts are very strong!!
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    Invincible Demon Lord in The Anime World!
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  • TangyChili
    TangyChili1yr
    Replied to VisionaryWorld

    So, this is just practice then... so will you even finish this fic? cause I'm having Monkey in the Multiverse flashbacks.

    Ch 14 I'm Back!
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    Reborn as a False Uchiha?
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  • TangyChili
    TangyChili1yr
    Commented

    Honestly, I think that you can just release one per day, since that's already very good for webnovel standards. Plus, of you do this you can stock up chapters which you can post on days you don't write anything. That being said, if you're confident enough to write enough chapters to mass release every friday we'll certainly welcome it happily. Also, if you're confident in your story you could even set up a Patreon, though you'd need to observe if people like your story enough to pay for it, so long term.

    Ch 14 I'm Back!
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    Reborn as a False Uchiha?
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  • TangyChili
    TangyChili1yr
    Commented

    well now that you've explained yourself a bit, thanks btw, I think you should stick with this

    Should I continue with this, keep moving forward with my plan and have things be explained later down the line?
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    Beep Boop
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  • TangyChili
    TangyChili1yr
    Replied to Apersonalhuman

    A beta reader refers to a proof reader, a person who reads the story before it's published to check for any errors.

    [AN: Hey guys! Please point out any mistakes i make in the rewrite.]
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    Food Wars: A Dropout's Redemption (Rewrite)
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  • TangyChili
    TangyChili2yr
    Commented

    Finally! I've seen so many Pokemon fics with mc training aura, but never see them fight.

    Ch 146 Who said only pokemon fought
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    SOARING TO NEW HEIGHTS: Welcome to my pokemon world
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  • TangyChili
    TangyChili2yr
    Commented

    Btw, author, I just remembered this is an AU, but how AU are we talking? like is the only thing present from the canon the power system of Nen? will we see the original characters or no?

    Ch 17 The Monsters True Name
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    One Piece: The Third Apprentice
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  • TangyChili
    TangyChili2yr
    Commented

    Pretty badass ngl

    "I can't appear cool with my glasses anymore." He said his last words as he rapidly lost the feeling of all of his senses, and his vision turned dark into the eternal abyss.
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    Realistic Tower of God: The Martial Way
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  • TangyChili
    TangyChili2yr
    Commented

    What stats does a Kage have?

    [Strength: 1,300]
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    Lilith's Rise [Drop]
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  • TangyChili
    TangyChili2yr
    Commented

    she should get a megaphone to talk louder or how about telepathy so they can't even try to not hear it. Nayla (with megaphone at hand) teleports behind devil, yells at the top of her lungs "may the power of Christ compel you!"

    (A/N About Reciting Holy Scripture part, I think it's feasible...well it's just my opinion so it might different from you guys, but who cares? this is my fanfic so I want to put everything that I have in my mind and share it with you)
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    Traveling through Multiverse with Fiction Card System
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