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Review Detail of TangyChili in Douluo’s Stealing the Ten Thousand Realms System!

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TangyChili
TangyChiliLv41yrTangyChili

I dont know how anyone can stand to read this MTL. First of all, the mc of the novel is called "the clan" like that no uppercase no nothing so you get confused reading it. That alone should stop at least 95% of readers, including the few who can stand reading MTLs daily like me. Plus, the story ain't even that good, it's just a generic Chinese DD fanfic where the mc likes to shit on Tang San. The system allows him to steal things and abilities/powers from any universe I think. Additionally, the system has this "hate" points system thingy that even the translator left a TN saying that it doesn't add much to the plot. Also, when the mc steals something from someone, they somehow know that it's the mc who stole it with no explanation. TL;DR just don't read it, even if you're desperate.

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Douluo’s Stealing the Ten Thousand Realms System!

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TangyChili
TangyChiliLv4TangyChili

wait, when was this mentioned? I got to chap 9 before dropping it, I guess I missed it so mb on that.

Taddena:If I talk about the system, when Mc steals something, he gains hate points from the person he stole. His face appears in the mind of the person he played, I think the author put it as a comedy and added it as a system tweak.
Taddena
TaddenaAuthorTaddena

Yes, although it has many shortcomings, I don't think it has anything to criticize so heavily. Believe me I've read a lot of douluo ff, a lot of mtl,raw. It's one of the best among them because it doesn't break the universe with absurd forces, at least most things are within reason. Tang san is debatable but yu xiaogang is really garbage, I don't think it's debatable. It's a bit long, but one of the best douluo ffs, if you really want to read and love the douluo universe, at least take a look.

Taddena
TaddenaAuthorTaddena

If I talk about the system, when Mc steals something, he gains hate points from the person he stole. His face appears in the mind of the person he played, I think the author put it as a comedy and added it as a system tweak.

Taddena
TaddenaAuthorTaddena

Anyway, thank you for your comment, your opinion is valuable to me!.

TangyChili
TangyChiliLv4TangyChili

so like are you the author or translator or something? why would my feedback matter to you? btw, I know my phrasing sound very aggressive through text so I'm sorry for that, but I genuinely curious

Taddena:Anyway, thank you for your comment, your opinion is valuable to me!.
TangyChili
TangyChiliLv4TangyChili

Mmmm, I don't know man, you can't fault me for saying it's a generic fanfic and you know it is. Also, I've read many MTLs I can stand reading them despite translation quality, but the fact that the mc is called "the clan" is such a big turn off. It may seem little but names are very important and especially when it's the mc. Other character's names although translated badly I can still get through context, but the mc is an oc. Like maybe you could change the name to something else that sounds like a proper name. However, I don't enjoy reading it with his name like so.

Taddena:Yes, although it has many shortcomings, I don't think it has anything to criticize so heavily. Believe me I've read a lot of douluo ff, a lot of mtl,raw. It's one of the best among them because it doesn't break the universe with absurd forces, at least most things are within reason. Tang san is debatable but yu xiaogang is really garbage, I don't think it's debatable. It's a bit long, but one of the best douluo ffs, if you really want to read and love the douluo universe, at least take a look.
Taddena
TaddenaAuthorTaddena

Although mc's name was disturbing at first, he must have received a lot of criticism from the author, so he changes mc's name to "xiaozong". As for the system description, there are some additional sections, but I didn't throw them away, thinking they were unnecessary, as far as I remember, the author wrote in his note that he made the system just for the comedy undertone. Finally, the reason why your comment is valuable to me; I love to share this story here, people write their own opinions. This is a valuable thing for me. I'm thinking of writing a book myself in the future, and I understand what people are uncomfortable with, thanks to your comments. :) note: my english is not good enough to write this paragraph, i wrote it from google translate, i hope i explained what i mean.

TangyChili:Mmmm, I don't know man, you can't fault me for saying it's a generic fanfic and you know it is. Also, I've read many MTLs I can stand reading them despite translation quality, but the fact that the mc is called "the clan" is such a big turn off. It may seem little but names are very important and especially when it's the mc. Other character's names although translated badly I can still get through context, but the mc is an oc. Like maybe you could change the name to something else that sounds like a proper name. However, I don't enjoy reading it with his name like so.
Taddena
TaddenaAuthorTaddena

I didn't want to blame you, I appreciate your objective comments. :)

TangyChili:Mmmm, I don't know man, you can't fault me for saying it's a generic fanfic and you know it is. Also, I've read many MTLs I can stand reading them despite translation quality, but the fact that the mc is called "the clan" is such a big turn off. It may seem little but names are very important and especially when it's the mc. Other character's names although translated badly I can still get through context, but the mc is an oc. Like maybe you could change the name to something else that sounds like a proper name. However, I don't enjoy reading it with his name like so.