alternatively thinking you could say there aren't males because they give birth so are therefore cooler is female but is masculine presenting

there is a character that was able to master the gentle fist without the byakugan by memorizing the placement of chakra pathways in various positions of the body

oh he's definitely a tsundere

I knew this was going to be a bromance

well from what I read it's not exactly explained and is inconsistent at best on how exactly it works and won't now that toriyama is gone unless he had a backlog or so

I call your bluff

Dido, but you this time.

maybe the loss of an arm would wake him up to his future as a cuck

well isn't that the goal for God ki? ssj god isn't actually a super Saiyan transformation it's them using god ki, ssj blue is a super Saiyan transformation multiplying god ki specifically therefore increasing the amount of God ki. but if all his ki is god ki he would technically always be in ssj god (the red one) then would he be able to use the Evil transformation?

if he can't use the Evil transformation with God ki will he just not be able to use it when he eventually transforms all his ki into God ki?

i feel this would also work really well with dragon ball and star wars

so is his aspect going to be something shady?.....get it? because he's a nara lol

I feel this is a skill building exercise for a new author maybe include some specific things you noticed? but I agree with what you have to say I feel it's just destinations without any journey combined with a lack of description in location or people.

yup, as the saying goes show don't tell and so far he's been saying what has happened without describing the journey just various vague destinations and people

this is a lesson in the phrase show don't tell everything I got through reads as "this happened then that, but then something surprising, we made some crazy shit but you really should have been there it was awesome sauce" the whole thing is a mix of third person while also being first person in a humble a good effort for a project to self improve on the authors behalf but frustrating to read.

i second this just don't make it the only thing this is about

he didn't make it he helped other people alter it so it stayed effective

there is another person trying to copy paste this novel here but you can find the original under novelupdates.com under the title started

if you want to "improve" work that's already being translated send what you have to the people doing it originally and ask for a job or start on something that isn't spoken for

says the guy with a patrion ? if this was honest you would have linked or at least mentioned the "inferior version" you can't just change some grammar, change goblin to gnome and call it something other than copy paste... this isn't highschool