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I decided to try writing my own novel, I definitely underestimated how much time and energy it takes to write. I underestimated the process to make a good novel. Good work all authors!!
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Dude he doesn’t have ice release, he can only use ice release thx to the rinne sharingan from the sage of six paths chakra that soon left his body after the battle just like how Naruto was able to use magnet, lava and boil release thx to the chakra of the tailed beast and yang from sage of six paths.. read a recap on gamer rant
Fugaku never had an ms, though there might have been a reason he was called wicked eye fugaku, maybe due to his strong genjutsu or maybe he had Amaterasu and Kangutsuchi
U don’t know that for sure. If it is a battle of consumption then maybe minato may win but if Fugaku manages to get minato with a genjutsu, a second is all he needs to defeat minato.. don’t forget that minato is a civilian ninja with the only reason for his strenght being the flying raijin and rasengan other than that, he is comparable to kakashi during canon chunin exams
Kakashi was dog.. we’ve seen episodes on kakashi in anbu
The plot is good, however, stop trying to be fancy with words and speak direct and proper English. Every sentence seems so fancy and it seems like author tries to be poetic but it fails because it comes out as bland. It’s fine to use figure of speech, fancy words, indirect words.. but when the writing is the same throughout, it just seems bland and boring. Infact I struggle to finish a chapter cuz it just sounds the same. Switch up the POV more often and stop with the poetry, it’s a novel not a poem. I admire the effort though. Good Job
Well my reason was that it was the typical Chinese villain novel with mc tying to give justification for his vile acts. We know how it ends up, even though mc does bad stuff, the heroines fall for mc for no reason and they start hating the protagonist, who usually don’t have fighting chances at all.. also mc is a disgusting perv that likes kids
Bye bye
Guy? Tranny?
Noice
I dropped as well, maybe I found ur reason
You uneducated mortal. Silence
Where tf have u seen that?
Sleeping with a random guy u met on the street is kinda weird for a virgin ngl.. u couldn’t make it like they went on couple dates and they grew to like each other cuz she kinda seems free for someone with no experience
Word 😂😂.. it’s not even a real flex since it’s not the authors flex but the character flexing
God no
Dawg😭😭