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I decided to try writing my own novel, I definitely underestimated how much time and energy it takes to write. I underestimated the process to make a good novel. Good work all authors!!

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    covestar24min
    Replied to MrITookAnotherL

    Dude he doesn’t have ice release, he can only use ice release thx to the rinne sharingan from the sage of six paths chakra that soon left his body after the battle just like how Naruto was able to use magnet, lava and boil release thx to the chakra of the tailed beast and yang from sage of six paths.. read a recap on gamer rant

    Did you know that Sasuke has ice release in canon? Should I make him have ice release much early on?
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    The Root of A Village
    Anime & Comics · MrITookAnotherL
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  • covestar
    covestar50min
    Replied to MrITookAnotherL

    Fugaku never had an ms, though there might have been a reason he was called wicked eye fugaku, maybe due to his strong genjutsu or maybe he had Amaterasu and Kangutsuchi

    Should I make Fugakus eye power unique or should I follow what google says lol
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    The Root of A Village
    Anime & Comics · MrITookAnotherL
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  • covestar
    covestar52min
    Replied to DaoistcaqwL5

    U don’t know that for sure. If it is a battle of consumption then maybe minato may win but if Fugaku manages to get minato with a genjutsu, a second is all he needs to defeat minato.. don’t forget that minato is a civilian ninja with the only reason for his strenght being the flying raijin and rasengan other than that, he is comparable to kakashi during canon chunin exams

    Fugaku vs Minato
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    The Root of A Village
    Anime & Comics · MrITookAnotherL
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  • covestar
    covestar1h
    Posted

    It’s actually very good ya know, I hope the author doesn’t drop this and if author feels burnt out then he shouldn’t write too many stories at once.. also, dawg.. wtf is the novels cover

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    Naruto: Hatake Kakashi
    Anime & Comics · DaoistaHADNk
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  • covestar
    covestar5h
    Commented

    Kakashi was dog.. we’ve seen episodes on kakashi in anbu

    Finally, 'dragon'gave Kakashi a codename, 'Wolf'. Although it is unknown if Kakashi's codename in the original work was the same, from now on, Kakashi's codename in the Anbu will be 'Wolf'!
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    Naruto: Hatake Kakashi
    Anime & Comics · DaoistaHADNk
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  • covestar
    covestar7h
    Posted

    So slow… wth, mc doesn’t seem so strong

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    The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.
    Anime & Comics · MonkWithAPen
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  • covestar
    covestar7h
    Posted

    This is a translation.. I forgot the title but if u go on mtlnation and search for Hera, u will find it.. it’s good the author translates it better but it’s still readable on mtlnation and it hasn’t updated in a while also isn’t this stealing?

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    Against Olympus
    Fantasy · Overlord_Of_KARMA
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  • covestar
    covestar9h
    Posted

    The plot is good, however, stop trying to be fancy with words and speak direct and proper English. Every sentence seems so fancy and it seems like author tries to be poetic but it fails because it comes out as bland. It’s fine to use figure of speech, fancy words, indirect words.. but when the writing is the same throughout, it just seems bland and boring. Infact I struggle to finish a chapter cuz it just sounds the same. Switch up the POV more often and stop with the poetry, it’s a novel not a poem. I admire the effort though. Good Job

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    The Extra Wants Control
    Fantasy · Kas73_
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    covestar19h
    Replied to SAINT_of_ORIGIN

    Well my reason was that it was the typical Chinese villain novel with mc tying to give justification for his vile acts. We know how it ends up, even though mc does bad stuff, the heroines fall for mc for no reason and they start hating the protagonist, who usually don’t have fighting chances at all.. also mc is a disgusting perv that likes kids

    Xiao Fan could only bid farewell to his parents with tears and join the Supreme Profundities Sacred Land.
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    I, The Destined Villain, Start With The Saintess!
    Anime & Comics · TheBoredWriter69
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  • covestar
    covestar1d
    Commented

    Bye bye

    "I doubt I can forget that blush, your look, your laugh, your cheeks that stare at me when you talk to me, Dad really doesn't know how to appreciate what he has. If I was him then I would want to know more about you and desire you more."
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    I am Morty Smith
    Anime & Comics · Try_hard
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    covestar4d
    Commented

    Guy? Tranny?

    "My lord, this is the guy who destroyed my fleet and killed my soldiers."
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    MARVEL: Start to Rule the Universe
    Anime & Comics · typicalanimewatchr
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    covestar8d
    Posted

    Book hasn’t updated in 3 months, not sure if it will.. it gives off chines translation vibes.. not sure if it is or if it’s the authors work.. regardless, I’ll be taking this off my library as it has yet to be continued

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    Super Basketball System
    Sports · SuperAlchemist
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  • covestar
    covestar9d
    Commented

    Noice

    "Since there's no one interested in bidding, the item now belongs to Number 69! Congratulations, number 69!"
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    Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!
    Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
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  • covestar
    covestar11d
    Replied to NewfoundBlade

    I dropped as well, maybe I found ur reason

    Xiao Fan could only bid farewell to his parents with tears and join the Supreme Profundities Sacred Land.
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    I, The Destined Villain, Start With The Saintess!
    Anime & Comics · TheBoredWriter69
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  • covestar
    covestar13d
    Replied to Kratos_theLycaon

    You uneducated mortal. Silence

    Then, he gave her a chaste kiss on her forehead and a one armed hug, since his other still held his plate. Then, he got up, placed another kiss to Jenna forehead after placing his forehead against hers. And then, he sat back down, where he saw Caroline, also bawling her eyes out. So, with a small laugh through closed lips, he leaned over to her, placed his hand on her cheek and gave her a small kiss on her lips. "Cheer up, buttercup. Your friend will be okay. Why? Because I'm here."
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    The Vampire Diaries - Gilbert's Reckoning
    TV · hunterxxhunter2011
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  • covestar
    covestar13d
    Replied to Lc_The_Second

    Where tf have u seen that?

    Use that blood supply to heal my body after every workout to gain strength, flexibility, and endurance.
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    The Vampire Diaries - Gilbert's Reckoning
    TV · hunterxxhunter2011
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  • covestar
    covestar14d
    Commented

    Sleeping with a random guy u met on the street is kinda weird for a virgin ngl.. u couldn’t make it like they went on couple dates and they grew to like each other cuz she kinda seems free for someone with no experience

    While going there, jenny seemed to be nervous as it must be her first time but I was completely fine as I had sleep with a lot of women in my previous life.
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    Reincarnated Into The Pokémon World
    Anime & Comics · GodlyMadara
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  • covestar
    covestar14d
    Replied to WalterHeisenberg

    Word 😂😂.. it’s not even a real flex since it’s not the authors flex but the character flexing

    While going there, jenny seemed to be nervous as it must be her first time but I was completely fine as I had sleep with a lot of women in my previous life.
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    Reincarnated Into The Pokémon World
    Anime & Comics · GodlyMadara
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  • covestar
    covestar14d
    Replied to Zero_XMax

    God no

    "Jason," I said
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    Fairy Tail-Transmigrated In Order To Sleep With Babes
    Anime & Comics · Yuri_Lover23
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  • covestar
    covestar18d
    Replied to Mrweepknight

    Dawg😭😭

    It was an Earth shattering scream. My grip around her tightened as we turned to roar and saw Harlem burning. There were people running away in fear, fires burning, cars broken down into pieces, roads destroyed. It all happened so fast, I couldn't believe what I saw next.
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    "Caught in the Web of the Spider."
    Anime & Comics · ShihaoGamer
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