ButtNakedMan
I'm just a mad man trying to regain his sanity. Bad grammar doesn't make someone a bad Author, not fixing the mistakes is what makes someone a bad Author.
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ButtNakedMan1yrReplied to CultivatorReaderah I thought that's a grammatical error
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said the girl whose brain circuit is in her b**bs
Do you not understand how normal people think? Your brain circuits are weird! - ButtNakedMan1yrCommented
*Don't make fun of him. He might burn your house down. ?
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There are more things that you can do if you run out of ideas. Game scripts! or even RPG Board Games! game scripts as in Lore, you can use games with deep lore for example Witcher, Dark Souls, Warhammer, Mass Effect and Dragon Age. And also you can write the world background for Dungeon and Dragons!
Ch 36 Chapter 33: Future Plans - ButtNakedMan1yrCommented
*At the moment
The moment the air around Rias and Qin Tian was pink. There were two people who had ugly expressions on their faces. - ButtNakedMan1yrCommented
don't use "very love", that sounds uncomfortable and I'm pretty sure it's incorrect. Use "she loves her little Tian very much" instead
Actually, she was very love of her little Tian, especially when the two of them had grown up together since childhood. - ButtNakedMan1yrCommented
*his personality
She knew from the first time she heard her little Tian's inner voice, she did indeed feel that her little Tian was different from the one she knew. At first she thought it was someone else's inner voice that sounded similar to her little Tian, but after matching some information from his inner voice. It really was her little Tian, even though her personality was different from the one she knew. - ButtNakedMan1yrPosted
I can't read through all of the chapters, I don't have any more brain cells to lose. The grammar and writing quality is bad, incorrect tense used, typos, and the worst of all is NO COMMAS. Huge Paragraph with no commas, it makes it uncomfortable and harder to read because you don't know when a sentence ends and when a new one starts. I thought writing 3 other books will surely improve your writing but I guess not
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sir, this is a Wendy's
As for Qin Tian? He played quite well and wasn't a burden. Although sometimes Koko glared at him when blow up allies. - ButtNakedMan1yrCommented
blow up allies? that sounds gae
As for Qin Tian? He played quite well and wasn't a burden. Although sometimes Koko glared at him when blow up allies. - ButtNakedMan1yrCommented
looks more like Jesus? My God what have you witnessed?
Samuel stopped near the destroyed wall and whistled in slight amazement and awe, perhaps because it was night then and seeing clearly was impossible but this... "It looks way more...Jesus.." - ButtNakedMan1yrCommentedCh 375 Chapter 373: The Shadow Of Everything In The World!
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Klein:
"The Changer is what you are, but it doesn't matter much in the end. You will not be able to change the inevitable even with your future might. Rejoice with what little time you have left, before the true end arrives…" - ButtNakedMan1yrReplied to CultivatorReader
yeah I deleted it, it's annoying and happens every time I comment lol
Walter – "Fine, if you feel it so important, I will take the risk and give you this 200,000 deal anyways. It's not like you will hit it." - ButtNakedMan1yrCommented
u can still use this "it's not going to hit the target anyway so let's give u this extra bet" excuse, but when his movies/books debut and it sells like crazy, the studios should be acting more cautious when making a contract with him
Walter – "Fine, if you feel it so important, I will take the risk and give you this 200,000 deal anyways. It's not like you will hit it." - ButtNakedMan1yrCommented
There's so much green light coming off Issei's body that a Green Hat formed on top of his head
The green light on Issei's body erupted and Issei's armor began to regenerate. He naturally intended to continue the battle to the death. Until Qin Tian died, he didn't stop. - ButtNakedMan1yrCommented
Chapter Master D. Garp
"No thanks, but my fist of love will free your soul for good." The punch sends the enemy leader's head flying while his body below the neck simply slumps down to the floor, only one leg somehow manages to finch due to muscle reaction. The head hit the wall and exploded into a large lump of goo as it slide down like a slime. - ButtNakedMan1yrCommented
now this is what Gaijin's CS feels like
* Removed Moderator Support Timer. I'll talk if I feel like it. - ButtNakedMan1yrCommented
2022? a thousand years gone by?
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Purge? gives me Warhammer Vibes
The Purge, they called it. The Church of the Eternal Blazing Sun launched a cleansing of the crown. It was a day of blood, fire, and betrayal. Screams of sorrow, pain, and hatred filled the entire Tudor Empire, shrouding everything in despair and death.