Review Detail of ButtNakedMan in AS DARKSEID IN MARVEL (OMNIVERSE)

I can't read through all of the chapters, I don't have any more brain cells to lose. The grammar and writing quality is bad, incorrect tense used, typos, and the worst of all is NO COMMAS. Huge Paragraph with no commas, it makes it uncomfortable and harder to read because you don't know when a sentence ends and when a new one starts. I thought writing 3 other books will surely improve your writing but I guess not