it's really rough in some parts of the story so far, it's like the author was trying to fill the amount of paragraphs per chapter just to make the required word count and hence the occasional repeated lines and elongated wordplay.. or is it just how it sounds once it's been translated into English?

🤣 yes slaughter accompanied by war drum is slowly becoming a regular event 👌

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TFTC👍 - Thanks For The Chapter 👍

thanks for the heads up👍behind the scenes its probably a balancing act the talent and the provider sometimes struggle to maintain just to push the promised deadline across the finish line, relatively intact.. nothing but respect honestly

these last 2 chapters were pretty much the same.. repeated twice [img=faceslap]

hey author great story so far really enjoying the novel👍 by the way I just bought the privileged chapters but ch. 64 seems to be locked? not sure if it's a glitch on my end or if just to soon to access? anyway keep up the good work [img=update]

but that fear WAS small IN COMPARISON to this..

but the image of the threateningly HUGE demon..

half metal giants (plural?)

it'd be great if the mc could teach Alex a lesson and then turn her into a subordinate with that contract for good measure

binge read this novel everyday because it's awesome!

HB dude 🥳👍

mega LOL! "your so hot right now" aahahahaaa!! classic 🤣👍

how many chapters per day/week? only because I find myself constantly checking for updates .. not sure if that's a good thing lol 😆 thanks in advance

wow I heard that he was sick and wished him well but didn't realise to what extent nothing but praise for his creativity as an author really sad to hear he is no longer with us thanks for the Intel and condolences to Tom and his family

this novel was one of my most anticipated stories every time it was due to release I'd be like counting the hours it was that good but the release schedule of chapters was kinda up and down .. concerning the novel though it was like really slow to get going in some parts especially in the beginning but for the sake of character developement it was worth the wait once the story got going .. I would have liked to read this novel through to its end but I'm assuming for whatever reason the author dropped this novel which was a bit of a let down because I was totally invested in this story .. so yeah overall without the irregular chapter releases and the sudden stop to this novel I would have definitely given this novel a 10 out of 10

it would take FOR the three factions ..

#1 cool concept so far so good👍 .. #2 they should move on from the uni scene soon and find a military bunker to base out of .. #3 where's his family at? a week out in this chaos seems kinda like a hail Mary ✌[img=update]