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TheSIothKing

TheSIothKing

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I like books. That’s about it really.

2018-10-03 JoinedCanada
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  • TheSIothKing
    TheSIothKing1yr
    Replied to Anime_World_6808

    I’m… confused. You’re upset at what? That I made a review about my opinion on the book? Isn’t that what a personalized review is? I’m not representing anyone or anything but myself. I laid out the reasoning for my review, and let others know what I thought. I understand if you don’t agree, but there’s no need to call someone else’s taste “trash”. That seems purposefully hateful and non constructive. I may not agree with you about this book, but I don’t wish to call your taste in literature names. Just seems a bit rude. :( Instead why not lay out the things you like about the book, so someone reading my review can have an alternative point of view before trying it themselves?

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    I Am Loaded with Passive Skills
    Eastern · Eat Apples Late at Night
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  • TheSIothKing
    TheSIothKing1yr
    Replied to bubilicious_king

    Damn right. People write whole articles about frogs with a slightly different tongue. I write ”essays” about grammar mistakes in otherwise interesting webnovels. We all have a finite amount of time in this world. What we spend it on should be important. To me, this is important, as the author surely believes their story is. To you, perhaps ridiculing others about how they spend their time is important. No one knows but you! P.S. The first chapter has more than one grammar mistake. I actually couldn’t find a whole paragraph without one. Lol.

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    White Online
    Games · Alekzi
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  • TheSIothKing
    TheSIothKing1yr
    Replied to KhingPilot

    I’ve found my fun. Calling out reviews that have factual errors that are glaringly obvious. Lol.

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    White Online
    Games · Alekzi
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  • TheSIothKing
    TheSIothKing1yr
    Replied to Taoist_Azure_Sword

    Dude I don’t think we’re reading the same novel. The very first sentence is structured wrong, and has a grammar issue. “World’s first, highly anticipated VRMMORPG White Online is going to the sale tomorrow!” Why is there a comma after first? There’s no second comma, so it isn’t a pause for effect, nor is it an explanation comma. If you were going to put a comma anywhere in that sentence, put it after VRMMORPG, as you’re explaining the first VRMMORPG is White Online. And don’t get me started on “…going to the sale tomorrow!”. What even is that?!? Is the sale a place and White Online a person, like saying, “Tom is going to the office tomorrow!”? Again, are we reading the same novel? (Btw, there is way more glaring grammar issues, it’s just funny to me that the literal first sentence you read has multiple. Lol)

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    White Online
    Games · Alekzi
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  • TheSIothKing
    TheSIothKing1yr
    Posted

    Dropped on Ch. 1. Glaring grammar issues. I’m really annoyed with any sort of grammatical issues, so I try to only read off of the top charts of WebNovel. It looks like I need to wait until this gets enough traction to get a rewrite or, at the very least, a proofread. The first sentence has a grammar issue. Lol.

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    White Online
    Games · Alekzi
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  • TheSIothKing
    TheSIothKing2yr
    Replied to syphon09

    … Wait. Earth joke. Falls flat. . . . FLAT EARTH CONFIRMED. EXECUTE ORDER 66, “PUMP IT UP”.

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    Global Descent: 100×Reward
    Sci-fi · The Sky Wishes to Clear Up
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  • TheSIothKing
    TheSIothKing2yr
    Replied to Nicholas_Gagliardo

    Nah, he only got like 50 xp or so.

    [Rank: Level 1]
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    Lords Trying to Survive: Strategizing from a Rundown Yard
    Games · Chinese Blacksmith
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  • TheSIothKing
    TheSIothKing2yr
    Commented

    Even more blatant Mount and Blade copying. Charm instead of Charisma, but those skills may as well be a carbon copy! Lol. I love it!

    [Every point increases the upper limit of the army by 1 and the charisma of the Lord. When the following skills are added, the skill level cannot exceed 1/3 of the charisma: Command Control, Captive Management, Transaction]
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    Lords Trying to Survive: Strategizing from a Rundown Yard
    Games · Chinese Blacksmith
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  • TheSIothKing
    TheSIothKing2yr
    Commented

    It’s Mount and Blade Warband! Same system. 1/3 of the levels too! Lol

    [Every point increases 5 Health Points, 1% Damage, and the Lord's Strength. When the following skills are added, the skill level cannot exceed 1/3 of the Strength attribute: Iron Bones, Powerful Strike, Forced Throw, Strong Bow]
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    Lords Trying to Survive: Strategizing from a Rundown Yard
    Games · Chinese Blacksmith
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  • TheSIothKing
    TheSIothKing2yr
    Replied to TheSIothKing

    This is just steel though, I’m not crazy enough to try to get all minerals. That’d require actual spreadsheets, and I promised I’d never mix gaming/reading and spreadsheets again. Not after Eve Online. Ugh.

    There were more than 800 million tons of resources.
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    Interstellar War: My Star Fleet is Invincible
    Sci-fi · Laugh and Joy
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  • TheSIothKing
    TheSIothKing2yr
    Replied to EnablingBarley

    In 2019 around 1.7 billion tonnes of steel (some sources say over 2 billion, but getting an accurate count out of Southern Asia and parts of Africa is impossible) were mined. That’s 4.6 million tonnes per day. That’s probably decently close to what they can pull out here (estimated since we have a larger pop, but this planet was dedicated to just mining, added to the fact they have better tech). It was stated earlier that only a month had passed, so 4.6 x 30 (assuming their months are the same as ours) = 138m tonnes. That is what earth produces. You could argue that they have better tech and a larger pop dedicated to mining, but to reach 800m in a month, that is a factor of 5.8. Seems a bit much. Still loving the story. Honestly I’m enjoying cruching numbers just as much. ;)

    There were more than 800 million tons of resources.
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    Interstellar War: My Star Fleet is Invincible
    Sci-fi · Laugh and Joy
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  • TheSIothKing
    TheSIothKing2yr
    Commented

    And so the first pin to be knocked down in the future is established

    "You need to be careful of Ryan. He's a petty man. He looks like the type to take revenge for the smallest grievance."
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    Interstellar War: My Star Fleet is Invincible
    Sci-fi · Laugh and Joy
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  • TheSIothKing
    TheSIothKing2yr
    Commented

    This is an extremely short distance in space. The distance between the sun and earth is 152 million km, so you could imagine how close together these planets are.

    "I know of a colonial planet closest to Planet Helka. It is the newest colonial planet of Planet Bhutler and is called Planet Terra, a mineral resource planet. It's 100 million kilometers away. You can easy reach it with the help of the Rising Fighter Jets."
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    Interstellar War: My Star Fleet is Invincible
    Sci-fi · Laugh and Joy
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  • TheSIothKing
    TheSIothKing2yr
    Replied to Project_Traveler

    Yeah I’m with you brother. Seems odd they wouldn’t have more.

    "It's not wonder that Planet Bhutler only had three full fleets before executing interstellar plundering, even after almost 100,000 years of development."
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    Interstellar War: My Star Fleet is Invincible
    Sci-fi · Laugh and Joy
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  • TheSIothKing
    TheSIothKing2yr
    Commented

    *insert lewd things here*

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    Interstellar War: My Star Fleet is Invincible
    Sci-fi · Laugh and Joy
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  • TheSIothKing
    TheSIothKing2yr
    Commented

    105,000 meters by 68,000 meters. The radius of the planet is 7122 km. That means the surface area is 637.4 million km^2. the field is, again, 105,000 meters (105 meters is an average football field x 1000) by 68,000 meters, or 105km by 68km. So 74 km^2. Just for anyone wondering the sizes here, thats almost 1/10th the size of New York City.

    This time, there was an even larger clearing not far from the warehouse. It was as large as 1,000 football fields.
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    Interstellar War: My Star Fleet is Invincible
    Sci-fi · Laugh and Joy
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  • TheSIothKing
    TheSIothKing2yr
    Commented

    800m tonnes. 100m pop. Excuse me?

    There were more than 800 million tons of resources.
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    Interstellar War: My Star Fleet is Invincible
    Sci-fi · Laugh and Joy
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  • TheSIothKing
    TheSIothKing2yr
    Commented

    800 million tonnes of resources, but only 100 million population? That means everyone on the planet, including soldiers, babies and elderly have to mine 8 tonnes. EACH. Outside of outright teleportation it doesn’t seem viable, even in a tech advanced society, at least at this level. Still a great story though. :P

    Ch 9 Massive Destruction-Grade Battleship Production Line
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    Interstellar War: My Star Fleet is Invincible
    Sci-fi · Laugh and Joy
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  • TheSIothKing
    TheSIothKing2yr
    Replied to Grandmist_Sage

    Your dedication is admirable, brother. Keep up the good work.

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    Raging Orc Blood: God-Level Fusion
    Fantasy · Shocking by the Sight
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  • TheSIothKing
    TheSIothKing2yr
    Commented

    Did this Protag really get 300 levels (He gets 10, but thats double, so 5 should be base. 1500/5 = 300) of stats from one perk? Surviving a solo dungeon, no quality (legacy, rare. etc) requirements??? That sheeeet is borked

    Ch 29 The ruins of Bandit Lord Husk III
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    The Ancients World
    Games · easyread
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