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Taoist_Azure_Sword
Taoist_Azure_SwordLv41yrTaoist_Azure_Sword

I was scrolling through new novels and found this novel. I like vr novel so I decided to read this. My first thing to compliment is the writing quality. 5/5 no grammar mistakes, fight scenes are not long. The world building is pretty good as more and more info are given. Keep it up author

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White Online

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TheSIothKing
TheSIothKingLv11TheSIothKing

Damn right. People write whole articles about frogs with a slightly different tongue. I write ”essays” about grammar mistakes in otherwise interesting webnovels. We all have a finite amount of time in this world. What we spend it on should be important. To me, this is important, as the author surely believes their story is. To you, perhaps ridiculing others about how they spend their time is important. No one knows but you! P.S. The first chapter has more than one grammar mistake. I actually couldn’t find a whole paragraph without one. Lol.

bubilicious_king:Ain’t no way you just typed a whole essay on a grammar mistake. Bet you were crying while writing that.
Ponni_Bujji
Ponni_BujjiLv2Ponni_Bujji

waste of time

_blank69_
_blank69_Lv15_blank69_

Your pretty negative huh ill still try and read it tho

Ponni_Bujji:waste of time
Chibi_Zuobai
Chibi_ZuobaiLv4Chibi_Zuobai

read the novel and your right very good

Demelios
DemeliosLv14Demelios

Says the guy that in 24 day as already 204h of reading. You're a waste of food at that point.

Ponni_Bujji:waste of time
TheSIothKing
TheSIothKingLv11TheSIothKing

Dude I don’t think we’re reading the same novel. The very first sentence is structured wrong, and has a grammar issue. “World’s first, highly anticipated VRMMORPG White Online is going to the sale tomorrow!” Why is there a comma after first? There’s no second comma, so it isn’t a pause for effect, nor is it an explanation comma. If you were going to put a comma anywhere in that sentence, put it after VRMMORPG, as you’re explaining the first VRMMORPG is White Online. And don’t get me started on “…going to the sale tomorrow!”. What even is that?!? Is the sale a place and White Online a person, like saying, “Tom is going to the office tomorrow!”? Again, are we reading the same novel? (Btw, there is way more glaring grammar issues, it’s just funny to me that the literal first sentence you read has multiple. Lol)

KhingPilot
KhingPilotLv1KhingPilot

Seems you have much issues in life. Loosen up and get some fun.

TheSIothKing:Dude I don’t think we’re reading the same novel. The very first sentence is structured wrong, and has a grammar issue. “World’s first, highly anticipated VRMMORPG White Online is going to the sale tomorrow!” Why is there a comma after first? There’s no second comma, so it isn’t a pause for effect, nor is it an explanation comma. If you were going to put a comma anywhere in that sentence, put it after VRMMORPG, as you’re explaining the first VRMMORPG is White Online. And don’t get me started on “…going to the sale tomorrow!”. What even is that?!? Is the sale a place and White Online a person, like saying, “Tom is going to the office tomorrow!”? Again, are we reading the same novel? (Btw, there is way more glaring grammar issues, it’s just funny to me that the literal first sentence you read has multiple. Lol)
Ruddy_Ansyah
Ruddy_AnsyahLv1Ruddy_Ansyah

nice to book

OneFellSnow
OneFellSnowLv15OneFellSnow

Cannot say that I agree. Numerous sentence structure issues and mixing tenses(past, present). I only read 5 chapters and did not see an improvement. Needs proof reading and editing before posting. Will check out one the latest chapters to see if there are improvements before deciding to read.

OneFellSnow
OneFellSnowLv15OneFellSnow

Read the latest chapter, same issues persist. For those that are able to read and ignore the grammatical issues . Enjoy .

OneFellSnow:Cannot say that I agree. Numerous sentence structure issues and mixing tenses(past, present). I only read 5 chapters and did not see an improvement. Needs proof reading and editing before posting. Will check out one the latest chapters to see if there are improvements before deciding to read.
TheSIothKing
TheSIothKingLv11TheSIothKing

I’ve found my fun. Calling out reviews that have factual errors that are glaringly obvious. Lol.

KhingPilot:Seems you have much issues in life. Loosen up and get some fun.
Daoist_Ra1n_
Daoist_Ra1n_Lv10Daoist_Ra1n_

You all need to read some MTL. 😑

bubilicious_king
bubilicious_kingLv1bubilicious_king

Ain’t no way you just typed a whole essay on a grammar mistake. Bet you were crying while writing that.

TheSIothKing:Dude I don’t think we’re reading the same novel. The very first sentence is structured wrong, and has a grammar issue. “World’s first, highly anticipated VRMMORPG White Online is going to the sale tomorrow!” Why is there a comma after first? There’s no second comma, so it isn’t a pause for effect, nor is it an explanation comma. If you were going to put a comma anywhere in that sentence, put it after VRMMORPG, as you’re explaining the first VRMMORPG is White Online. And don’t get me started on “…going to the sale tomorrow!”. What even is that?!? Is the sale a place and White Online a person, like saying, “Tom is going to the office tomorrow!”? Again, are we reading the same novel? (Btw, there is way more glaring grammar issues, it’s just funny to me that the literal first sentence you read has multiple. Lol)
Volvo_62
Volvo_62Lv13Volvo_62

5/5 no grammar mistakes?? This is almost close to unreadable even in the first few chapter and was never proof read properly.

Gummybear912
Gummybear912Lv11Gummybear912

I'm so used to reading mtl now that I ignore all instances of bad grammar, or I would have gone insane by now

Daoist_Ra1n_:You all need to read some MTL. 😑
BuddyJC
BuddyJCLv10BuddyJC

Yeah, we definitly read different books. I am only commenting on your review because it is so incorrect. The grammar is pretty bad, even to the point of being painful at times.

BuddyJC
BuddyJCLv10BuddyJC

I concur.

TheSIothKing:Dude I don’t think we’re reading the same novel. The very first sentence is structured wrong, and has a grammar issue. “World’s first, highly anticipated VRMMORPG White Online is going to the sale tomorrow!” Why is there a comma after first? There’s no second comma, so it isn’t a pause for effect, nor is it an explanation comma. If you were going to put a comma anywhere in that sentence, put it after VRMMORPG, as you’re explaining the first VRMMORPG is White Online. And don’t get me started on “…going to the sale tomorrow!”. What even is that?!? Is the sale a place and White Online a person, like saying, “Tom is going to the office tomorrow!”? Again, are we reading the same novel? (Btw, there is way more glaring grammar issues, it’s just funny to me that the literal first sentence you read has multiple. Lol)
MILARCH
MILARCHLv12MILARCH

amazing

Gummybear912:I'm so used to reading mtl now that I ignore all instances of bad grammar, or I would have gone insane by now
Kp7741
Kp7741Lv11Kp7741

no grammar mistakes? 😗

ImFinnaDieBy25
ImFinnaDieBy25Lv3ImFinnaDieBy25

Did you forget to put a 0 next to that 5?