J3_R0_M3
of reading
942
Read books
It's really good, I always like your fight scenes, even though you said you hate writing it.
This is bad product? Everyday I'm trying to find a good fanfic in the rankings with no result, now I only have 4 fanfic I'm reading including this fanfic. If this is bad product, what do you call those other fanfic in the top 200.
The MC will not turn into vampire because he never dies, the vampire on the other hand will be high because of the taste of a pure blood made of God and then... The range is so wide, he can explode because the blood is regenerating, or maybe because the blood regenerating he will never go thirsty ever again.
IMO, a mage throwing big spells is better than a mage using spell to make himself bigger.
If the sneak is like in Skyrim then it's still ok,half of his speed is still fast.
You should have made this a hidden objective. Just putting it there is like telling what might happen next.
You're using Harry Potter as a title, does it mean your story will reach 1991?
This is it. I cannot follow anymore.
It's the parasitic giant beetle shino aburame use in the 4th ninja war.