too OP in very short time

Well, the story is not bad enjoyable to read to some degree. the fighting scenes were pretty amazing. the mc interactions with other character and how you portrayed were nice. What I disliked is the mc, you made him a copy of gojo saturo but he is not, he is someone with gojo abilities. Making the mc a battle maniac has left much to be desired, he is creating conflicts for himself without any fucking reason. as a reincarnated character he should realise that the coltivation world is too dangerous and no matter how stronger he is there will be always someone stronger, so he should take his time to get stronger and use all the ressources that he have.

in general the fanfic is not bad but the mc development is mediocre at best. he has all the tool to improove his strength rapidily but he doesn't do that(future knowledge_strong reason_bloodline). he barely show any improvement and the only thing he is doing is wasting his time. Then it come his mother pregancy from nowhere, totally seving no perpose at all. That was the worst events ever.

I am out. You mc is nothing more than a slave to his system, if he asked him to kill new born bebies, he will do it to get stronger. your system killed the character development to your mc. your mc is nothing more than a robot that do every mission the system askes him.

interesting story so far, I am really impressed . the development and the events are mooving nice. deapite that i disliked to some degree the first chapter as I find it too vague and Sarada obsession with Naruto ( I hope that they will only have student teacher relationship)

nice but too short

a imprtant question? why anakyn never used his power and the technology to heal himself? with all the power and technology that he had, his unability to heal himself is a big question

gg

My rating of this book is passable at best.I am an avid reader of ff, because of that especially in this website only few fanfic stories impressed me.in every story what reader concentrate on is the mc, if the autbor develop him well, the story will go well, if not then the story will turn up to be a disappointment.from the summary, you stated that you mc is a reincarnator, doesn't have a memory if the world that he found himself in is irrelevent but as someone who has backround kbowldege, he should have a selfworth and show independance, something that I never see.he is being tortured for years and despite that he never shown any or even the barest thought of revenge in the 19 chapters that I read.what kind of main character is this?pathetic and desappointed to the highest degree.

i don't like where you taking this story.i am out

of course he should live.technically he died because of his own stupidity, he is too much like Naruto full of dream and sunshine, surviving for few weaks will allow him to see the horror of war, it will allow him to devolop as a character amd make him take his carreer seriously.Also what's the point of bringing him if you ll kill him.canon stories became too boring.I hope for new things

first of all tha ks for the chapteri am greatly enjoying the story.For slade, kill him or not? I do not know but make sure to make him pay a heavy price for being a enemy of the gojo siblings.

well, first of all I want to thank me for compeleting all those chapters in one go.I want to thank me for the dedecation and the will and the patience that I shown during reading this story.I want to thank me for never quitting despite how slow paced the story is, and how incompetent the mc is, despite deing a reincarnator with metaknowledge.and I want to thank all of the people who are reading this story and say "May god be with you"

arai development and the fight itself has left much to be desired especially as arai has some meta knowledge.TOTALLY DISAPPOINTED

the mc strenght is unresonnableelite jonin to kage level????absurd, elite chounin to tabaco jonin is acceptable but your raiting is too highhe is an 8 years old, there is a limit to how much chakra hr can have to boost his physical strength and there is a limit to how much strength he body can have.

hokage??????????? hhhhhh as the the elders will give the hokage position to an uchiha, I believe you mean clan head

hmmmI am out personally I found that this story ended when you made the justice league, a banch of hypocrits and you took a derection when the mc and the league will become enimies.I hoped for things to improve but it did not.there is no proper direction to the story.the mc creating enemies right and left.he has a metaknowledge, I expected him to use his mind more that his muscles.

well to tell the truth, the idea of the story, the plot and eapecially the mc ability are amazing. But what made me give low rating to the story is mc pathetic development and his uncreative way of using his power. we have seen the mc only blaming himslef for his weaknesses over and over. he never traied for searching for a new way of applying his ability, learning new things that can support his team. thr mc fpr example have the power to control others, why he didn't use for weak cursed spirits and used them for gathering information for example. why he didn't use his abilities to force a packts against cursed spirits to gain their energy when he defeat them for example? you give your mc a very powerful ability, but you nerfed to a degree that made it useless, by doing so you nerfed your mc. I believe that this story has potential but it need more work.

nice

very interesting story, really. will you do any kind of stories like this especially the breaker??????