coz mc isn't a nerd nor fanfic lover as simple as that 🥱

wat abt rasengan?

disgusting mc..........I can understand if he is a native of that place but after isekaied from earth he is treating other like pet ...............

👋 i just got a movement of déjà vu , like hachiman in the future chapters became the sword master in one of school final men's kendo competitions when another kendo master acknowledged his breakthrough .........after reading all these chapters I finally concluded I have read this novel few years back but the novel was incomplete I don't remember exactly if its chinese translation or original?anyone had the same insight...?

I'm afraid the author is going to mix up with the Chinese 🤢🤢🤢.....

sorry really can't substitute with the mc pov.....adult or like a old man in a teen....

hey don't take every comment seriously 😒 that was a joke statement with seriously attitude 😑..if u read tons of Chinese fanfic u get wat I mean....try faloo or something they got the most fanfic anywhere else in the world 🌎 ....

sorry abt that....I know u will get confused if u read this....u have get into the story to have a general idea 💡abt this fic....just read 10 to 15 chapters and come back to my comments u will get it...

hey scold the author...not the mc

yes, if not for the author's plot armour & a fanfic that lunatic mc should have dies...he reminds me of cid from the eminence from the shadow

everything mc does is a coincidence 🤔 😅 if once or twice its ok...but all the time he writes as a coincidence making it awkward....so my advice, since u entered the forbidden zone I.e out of fic boundaries, time travel...u can also like reading the past or future through fate or get the knowledge about the fic through unconventional means....

its not I'm really bias against the fic but I've seen this type of writing style.... the mc will exactly follow the Canon to a T as a 3rd wheel, also robs and share action scenes and Dialogue of other casts and makes it as its own....and also adds some little changes to the story by adding chef role but overall its the same as Canon..

👋 too much like plot armour....atleast for her....

just missed sakurosou no pet, missed many high quality heroines....

only thing I don't like is the loner settings given to the mc...like a gimmick 😶 If not the whole fic would be amazing 😍 the mc skill should be mainly useful only in the upper floor or system should compensate with too op op op skill to make up for the team mates or mc abandons the skills and get a team mate or author not plans to continue the story to the lower floors... too poor planing of the skills. ....assuming he will get aoe attacks skill and need too much magic power , auxiliary skills ,etc ....and also close combat skills...unless he get like gate of Babylon ,a loner mc is not going to work.... assuming the mc with his loner settings somehow made to the 40th floor ,he is surrounded by thousands of monsters 👹 and with his magic skill which attach mental power to swords to remotely attack 😀 use inventory space to store swords like a nerfed version of gate of Babylon. ..or mc will get a broad sword turning into Chinese fic for sword surfing 🏄‍♂️ ...its really giving me goosebumps.... as I said "loner" settings is like a gimmick or a word play...wheather mc's skill get works only on pvp or p v monsters , the team mates like should not help defeat the monsters to work but can linger around him to help him in dire situations. too much bugs on settings ..... and lastly talk about the world settings ...danmachi.."Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon?"! due to mc loner settings , the author should use too much coincidence to get mc acting as a hero to save a girl from danger, if there is and he cannot act or teamup with other heroine's due to loner settings and mc combat skills. ...

I disagree to that ...in the same chapter mc explains why the adventures die due to accumulated fatigue without combat experience and he boasts he his otherself has combat experience....but he does the same mistake and nearly not die due to plot armor (author)...😋

yes , Mc skill is too pathetic 😅....is not on the same level at all....I don't know how the author came 😕 up with this skill is too limited...bell skill ratings is 7 star, mc star rating is 3 star ...... the mc skill should be mainly useful only in the upper floor or system should compensate with too op op op skill to make up for the team mates or mc abandons the skills and get a team mate or author not plans to continue the story to the lower floors... too poor planing of the skills. ....assuming he will get aoe attacks skill and need too much magic power , auxiliary skills ,etc ....and also close combat skills...unless he get like gate of Babylon ,a loner mc is not going to work....

yes, Mc not reliable at all.....before chapters explain how adventurous die due to accumulated fatigue , but he also does the same ..if not for the mc plot armor or authors fanfic mc life should be over by the 19th chapter.....

kinda feels unreal!....too much monsters and too much nonsense too 🧐 zero status combat power + no particular op powers + near mind down, 3+hrs continuous combat + loads of monsters coming + already down(no stamina) + philosophical internal beta-male monologue 😫 = hey is he really human 😑 status 1 player 😅

....this is not a serious fic, Mc is a loser , if ur expecting anything cooler than than Tatsuya , this is not for u....this fanfic is literally a self insert ....just follow the Canon with the mc as a 3rd wheel....mc wanted to be a chef but joins the magic high school and coincidentally made friends with the main cast.... mc is totally boring just like my review 😴