jerryeleko
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- jerryeleko11dCommentedCh 85 War is Diplomacy
- jerryeleko13dPosted
It's a great story for turning the brain off for a few hours every day. Sometimes, the writing style frustrates me because the more intelligent characters were just sounding like the mc's simplistic take on life. I imagined him to be a character like Cid from Eminence in Shadow, who is a very flippant character in a very serious world. I wish that could have been showcased properly. I'm sure the author will have all the chances in the world to make those adjustments in the future. Good luck!
- jerryeleko6mthCommented
battle iq: AOT's Armin vs bertoltd's collusus battle.battle instincts:AOT's Ackerman's bloodline.
Machia isn't any genius, he doesn't have a high Battle I.Q., but he has good battle instincts. The two are different... This means that he is not prone to outsmarting his opponent, but he can notice that he is strong and use his advantage. - jerryeleko7mthCommented
Are you imagining yourself being the Mc?
We had our house refurnished to make the kitchen on the upper left side of this room, "Oh, the last night's porn is still up. Want to watch it." - jerryeleko7mthCommented
Sigh... another bashing fic. I get that the ministry is curropt, but taking every chance to bash them is distracting.
"I've just had the most wonderful idea, folks," I said through my scowl. "Since Crouch and Bagman want to play games with our champions, I feel like we should turn the tables on them. Let's see how they like being ogled by a crowd in freezing weather." - jerryeleko7mthCommented
'nearly impossible'
We entered a staring contest for a few seconds before she ultimately back downed. FYI, during one of my earlier testing of [Gamer's Body] I found out that I didn't need to blink. This made it vertical impossible for me to ever lose a staring match. - jerryeleko7mthCommented
'[Mag. Def: 70]'
[Mag. Atk: 70] - jerryeleko7mthCommented
'my brother shook his head' to ' Jackie shook his head'
"He don't care." my brother shook his head, "Says they weren't going to quit anyways, so might as well be a real bastard about it. No need to keep things civil. Plus the eddies he pulled in, says he can't wait to do it again. Apparently the psychos running Maelstrom love him." - jerryeleko8mthCommented
*quite disappointing, given your reputation*
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Hahaha. That's funny... Oh, you were being serious. You understand that there is a reason why Marvel comics makes an effort to make international characters: both heroes and villains, even cosmic beings originating from Greek or Japanese mythology? it is so that the world feels complete and lived in, so that it doesn't feel like all the action is happening in only one part of the world. Well, the revenue from an international audience helps a lot too.
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Falcon's new name actually got a chuckle out of me...
Peter had frowned at that. Eddie wasn't his favourite person, but he knew they had all suffered under Harry and while his part had been dealt with it was still one of Jonah's favourite rants, about how a hero can be hiding a villain underneath, and that public figures such as Spider-Man weren't to be trusted. There were reports of Spider-Man and his amazing friends, and as they were all insects, Jonah had taken to calling them bugs, even the poor Falcon had been renamed Mosquito. - jerryeleko9mthCommented
you mean 'immortality', right? because immorality is something entirely different.
Inherited abilities: Fire Manipulation, Wind Manipulation, and Immorality. - jerryeleko9mthReplied to JustBearWithMe
thats's also called applying modern logic to ancient sensibilities.
Dumbledore explained in a weary, worn voice, "Unfortunately, the Headmaster of Hogwarts is just as much a political position as it is an educational one. That goes doubly so for me thanks to my other appointments. I simply cannot be seen showing favor to one student over another. Even for my favorite students like young Heather and her friends, I can only do so much and what I can do is only due to her pre-existing fame. - jerryeleko9mthCommented
what water?
He dragged himself out of the water, having been forced to jump into it, to escape Slade. - jerryeleko9mthCommented
A cooldown only makes sense when you have an ability that works out of the bounds of what you can already do. Synapse collapse is something he should be able to do with his advanced lightning manipulation ability.
‹Synapse Collapse›:: The ability to manipulate the electrical impulses in the brain and cause instant brain death. Cooldown: 24 hrs - jerryeleko9mthPosted
I'm sure a lot of people have already given you hell for stealing someone else's work so I won't add contribute any further to that narrative. You could be desperate for cash for all I know. But at the very least, try to come up with something of your own. If you're having trouble starting, just have chatgpt help you with the pilot. Hopefully, the rest will sort itself out from there.