jerryeleko
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It's a great story for turning the brain off for a few hours every day. Sometimes, the writing style frustrates me because the more intelligent characters were just sounding like the mc's simplistic take on life. I imagined him to be a character like Cid from Eminence in Shadow, who is a very flippant character in a very serious world. I wish that could have been showcased properly. I'm sure the author will have all the chances in the world to make those adjustments in the future. Good luck!
battle iq: AOT's Armin vs bertoltd's collusus battle.battle instincts:AOT's Ackerman's bloodline.
Are you imagining yourself being the Mc?
Sigh... another bashing fic. I get that the ministry is curropt, but taking every chance to bash them is distracting.
'nearly impossible'
'[Mag. Def: 70]'
'my brother shook his head' to ' Jackie shook his head'
*quite disappointing, given your reputation*
Hahaha. That's funny... Oh, you were being serious. You understand that there is a reason why Marvel comics makes an effort to make international characters: both heroes and villains, even cosmic beings originating from Greek or Japanese mythology? it is so that the world feels complete and lived in, so that it doesn't feel like all the action is happening in only one part of the world. Well, the revenue from an international audience helps a lot too.
Falcon's new name actually got a chuckle out of me...
you mean 'immortality', right? because immorality is something entirely different.
thats's also called applying modern logic to ancient sensibilities.
what water?
A cooldown only makes sense when you have an ability that works out of the bounds of what you can already do. Synapse collapse is something he should be able to do with his advanced lightning manipulation ability.
I'm sure a lot of people have already given you hell for stealing someone else's work so I won't add contribute any further to that narrative. You could be desperate for cash for all I know. But at the very least, try to come up with something of your own. If you're having trouble starting, just have chatgpt help you with the pilot. Hopefully, the rest will sort itself out from there.