Reviews of White Online

Honestly, I enjoyed the story a lot, everything was very nicely executed especially the Grammar, World development and all the maths needed in stats area, which is a basic flaw in many such novels, though there were some moments that gave 'gay' vibes but well, that's girly MC for you. But now that I have read some 200+ chapters, I felt something missing n that is that the MC is simply very nerfed, like I know that he's a intelligent n all but if we see his character, it's simply underpowered. Like, he has no OP skill like that heat vision, eye of (something), nullifying and copy skill, night vision, etc. He won the legacy tournament simply cuz' of the godly plot armour and bit of brain. So, I would like the author to give him at least some OP skills else it would be kinda unsatisfying.

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very worth of my money to read it...The story is very good considering the development of the main character. However the side characters are not giving so much impact... Maybe the author thinking for the next write up to consider the development of the side characters...👍👍👍

It’ s a great read that genuinely gets you invested in both the characters and the plot. I can’t describe how happy I am when I see that there are new chapters. I can’t wait to see where th story goes.

Most people won’t read this but if you do, I’ll try to give as unbiased review as possible. The writing quality is generally very good, but the letter “a” may have killed the author’s family as he often forgets to add it into sentences. For the updating stability, the author is pumping out chapters left and right so that’s fine. Story development seems interesting but the author often spoils his own novel as he writes, not sure why tho. Character design is when some onesies start to arise. The main character is supposed to be this super genius but he never actually does anything that smart. It becomes a tell not show sort of situation where the mc is somewhat smart at best. My last gripe with this is that the author includes two full status pages in the same chapter whenever he allocates his skill points. It’s just to boost word count and doesn’t actually contribute anything to the novel Overall, I’d classify this book as McDonalds coffee. Not bad, but could be better

Me: *Sees something new in recommended* Me: *Reads description* Me: *Sees “no Harem” in Tags* Me: *Immediately begins reading* Pretty good so far. Gonna keep reading.

Soooooo good! The characters were all well-written, the world background is solid. And I love the story development. This is highly recommended for me!

Amazing book. Among the best first 200 chapters ive seen in a book on this app. I beg of you author to release 1000 chaps already 😭😭😭😭😭

This is a really solid book to read. While the writing quality isn’t the best. It’s not bad either. Its good enough that you get what the author is trying to convey without any dissection of the text. On a scale of 5 to Monster Integration, It’s a solid 4-4.5. Not to shabby. Give the book a chance and you will be surprised like I was. Not gonna lie, I dropped the book about 2-3 months ago without reading more than 1 or 2 chapters, without giving it a chance. I found it in my recomended and decided to give it another try. 100% worth it. Would read again.

Dropped on Ch. 1. Glaring grammar issues. I’m really annoyed with any sort of grammatical issues, so I try to only read off of the top charts of WebNovel. It looks like I need to wait until this gets enough traction to get a rewrite or, at the very least, a proofread. The first sentence has a grammar issue. Lol.

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I don’t write reviews often but I’d like to give my input. I have not been disappointed in any aspect when it comes to this book. There is great writing, great character development, great world building, and a pretty cool combat style. If I were to have a complaint it would be that I’m reading through these chapters to quickly so I’m having to wait for the author to release more which sucks Overall I love this book I highly recommend it Thank you Author-Chan for the book

This is one of a very few video game novels i actually liked and could not stop reading the main character is more mysterious then i thought and i have a hunch who the FL could be but still wating on that but i like that the romantic stuff isn't rushed or started right form the start, can't wait to read more hope the series goes on for a long time😊 The story is a little slow paced form what i have read but it feels right for the story. There are little to none writing mistakes, some character design is good, i binged the novel in two days so i can't really say anything about updating stability but it says 14/ch a week and usually they are accurate so i gave a high rating as 14 ch a week i very good for us readers. World Background was a little lacking on some parts but only if you pay attention so it does not affect your reading but besides that it was good overall. The novel was very well made in my opinion so good job and a plus for almost no mistakes as a finnish person😁👍

After 100 chapters i can say that the story delivers everything it promises The main Character is unique and feels like he could be a real person and even if he makes mistakes who doesn't? All the side characters we now till now also don't feel two dimensional and have reasons to their actions. Interactions between characters don't feel forced or awkward if they aren't supposed to be The world of four seasons is simple enough on the surface to get behind but still leaves many questions unanswered and is obviously more complex than it seems at first glance The Story is interesting and unique (even if strictly speaking the setting isn't) and has a lot of potential. The pacing is especially great it never feels to fast or slow Writing quality and uploaded stability are great the sentences are easy to read and not repetitive. Put all that together with barely any typos at all and the uploaded rate of 2 chapters a day and you have yourself a perfect story!

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Honestly I don't see how it's possible to not give this story a good rating, don't get me wrong anything from 3 to 5 stars is a good rating. Anyway let's get to the review. 1-Writing Quality: It's well written and I haven't seen or payed attention to the mistakes, maybe I actually did but it was so small that I forgot about it. And the best part is the mysterious past... oops spoiler alert😅... but there's a tag so I'm safe, nothing spoiled.😁 [4 Stars in writing since I forgot about possible mistakes] 2-Story Development: The story revolves around a male main character and it's fun to see since even with every positive thing that happens to him there's also negative stuff that happened to him in real life. [5 Stars in Story Development because it's addictive if it's your cup of tea] 3-Character Design: The characters all have their own personalities and they give flavor to the story, there are some that weren't explored yet and there's still too much left in the unknown but so far it's great. [5 Stars Here] 4-Updating Stability: I added the book yesterday and was leisurely reading and got an update today so it's pretty stable at the moment. [5 Stars Here] 5-World Background: As far as original stories go this one has details about it's locations both in game and "real life" so can't complain there. There's also the fact that the info is not given like an info dump AKA encyclopedia of current location, it has the right amount needed while still leaving some to the imagination. [5 Stars Here] The story is pretty good, it's not perfect since finding a perfect story is next to impossible since tastes are personal but that doesn't mean this one isn't great. It might not be your cup of tea/coffee but I advise new readers to at least read 6/7 chapters before deciding on review.

Interesting story so far, with lots of potential. A fairly Unique take on vrmmorpg genre with the legacies, which is something i haven’t seen before. Although, you could say that the lords empire did something sinilar but it is clear that their are many differences between them

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I think there's a good chance for this story to be good, perhaps excellent. If it has the in game effects reality, it could be really good. Isaac's past should be revealed at a steady pace. Looking forward to the Legacy he will obtain. Perhaps the snow goddess will learn of his past and will help him evolve in some way? Looking forward to more.