Sorry for mistakes, not native speaker)

Interesting idea, good execution, interesting background, normal main character but sometimes he is so dumb that it makes me cringe. Also all those miraculous saves and massive luck (bassicaly plot armor) are VERY annoying. Really, the only time he showed good (not great) skills is in the beginning and later during the stream. You may say that during legacy batle royal he showed good skills too, but no. He was saved by the legacy guy literaly breaking rules and later on survived against this guy with lasers from his eyes through sheer luck. But I really like the idea and writing style so I hope that there will be less plot armor in future.