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DHillion

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  • DHillion
    DHillion4d
    Commented

    It might be helpful for the readers if after the chapter you added an overview of Arc's current stats.

    Ch 64 Chapter 64- Destroyed by his own self
    Gene Evolution: Monster Simulator
    Fantasy · Death_Simulation
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  • DHillion
    DHillion4d
    Commented

    Curious as to why the school is the transfer point. Why not some random government building?

    Ch 52 Chapter 52- Quite a good luck
    Gene Evolution: Monster Simulator
    Fantasy · Death_Simulation
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  • DHillion
    DHillion5d
    Commented

    I can tell You've got a lot of Super Gene influence. Have you considered having the beast meat processed into a Gene fluid. A more higher quality method of taking in the Gene's themselves.

    Ch 20 Chapter 20- Nearly dying because of silly jokes
    Gene Evolution: Monster Simulator
    Fantasy · Death_Simulation
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  • DHillion
    DHillion5d
    Commented

    The school arc is here

    Ch 135 [Bonus Chapter] 135 - Big improvement!
    Gamer Superstar
    Fantasy · NunuXD
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  • DHillion
    DHillion5d
    Commented

    at least there're some restrictions to the sim option. hopefully it won't be too dependent on the SIM ability.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2- Hiding and Running
    Gene Evolution: Monster Simulator
    Fantasy · Death_Simulation
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  • DHillion
    DHillion8d
    Commented

    When I think bars, I think Red Solo Cup. It's just such a fun song.

    Ch 128 128 - The last of the night!
    Gamer Superstar
    Fantasy · NunuXD
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  • DHillion
    DHillion8d
    Commented

    Looking forward to his arrival at his new school and his new classmates.

    Ch 127 [Bonus Chapter] 127 - Black Velvet Again?
    Gamer Superstar
    Fantasy · NunuXD
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  • DHillion
    DHillion8d
    Replied to DHillion

    I'm also a fan of the family dynamic and how each of them are discovering the path they are wanting to follow. Good job Nunu.

    Gamer Superstar
    Fantasy · NunuXD
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  • DHillion
    DHillion9d
    Posted

    you know I'm not normally a big fan of plots like this story that this author is currently working on, but I got to say I have been surprised at how engaging this story is.

    Gamer Superstar
    Fantasy · NunuXD
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  • DHillion
    DHillion12d
    Commented

    so when will his MP come into play?

    Ch 6 06 - Finally the Day!
    Gamer Superstar
    Fantasy · NunuXD
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  • DHillion
    DHillion1mth
    Replied to Calm_Mountains

    totally

    Ch 215 Remnants of a bygone past. Part-1.
    Reborn as an Extra
    Fantasy · Calm_Mountains
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  • DHillion
    DHillion1mth
    Commented

    I'd go with swordsman

    Ch 215 Remnants of a bygone past. Part-1.
    Reborn as an Extra
    Fantasy · Calm_Mountains
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  • DHillion
    DHillion3mth
    Commented

    less info dumps and a bit more about him getting stronger and the story progressing. I like the doppelganger idea, just hope they don't come up very much in the story. They'd be good for fillers.

    Ch 16 Jar of nothingness (3)
    Transmigrated into a Gamified Realm: Author's Journey In New Reality
    Fantasy · Lazy_Pen_Master
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  • DHillion
    DHillion7mth
    Commented

    Always good keep it up

    Ch 1300 Partaking in the Exile Recruitment
    Cultivation Online
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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  • DHillion
    DHillion7mth
    Posted

    An interesting 🤔 concept. I like the character build and how he isn't the MC type that continually sings his own praises. I do hope to see his self heal skill evolve further.

    I Have Infinite Skill Points
    Eastern · East City Order
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  • DHillion
    DHillion8mth
    Commented

    I like it so far. Kinda thought that the 7 day period would have ended by chapter 20.

    Ch 25 Mass Mutation
    Super Gene Hunting Ground
    Eastern · Bing Ji Ge
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  • DHillion
    DHillion8mth
    Commented

    This chapter was structured better than the previous chapters.

    Ch 55 Chapter 55 "The Battle's Turning Tide"
    Awakening Internal Energy and Mana
    Fantasy · workformhome
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  • DHillion
    DHillion8mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 55 Chapter 55 "The Battle's Turning Tide"
    Awakening Internal Energy and Mana
    Fantasy · workformhome
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  • DHillion
    DHillion9mth
    Commented

    Need to distinguish between inner monologue and non-inner monologue.

    Ch 1 chapter 1 a world full of magic and demons
    Awakening Internal Energy and Mana
    Fantasy · workformhome
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  • DHillion
    DHillion10mth
    Commented

    It's even better than before. I do wish for more scenes with his mother. Her character attitude is on par with the Emperor's.

    Ch 165 Chapter 165:First Ordeal
    Surviving As An Extra In Fantasy World Isn't Easy
    Fantasy · Mohitkumar
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