Reviews of When The Mob Villain Doesn’t Want To Die [BL]

Love reading it from chapter 1, I really enjoyed the plot a lot and the character design was legit so far. The world was also interesting. The dialoguewasn't forced, it was good.

okay... this review is as at 15 chapters.. Writing quality is definitely a 5.. the use of words is quite clean and there are only a handful of grammar mistakes that I have encountered through the course of the chapters I've sampled. Well done author. Story Development is a 4 as I'm not entirely sure if the flow is as attractive as I would expect. Its not slow but I feel an accelerating could be achieved to make the book more fun to read. Perhaps this isn't valid in the later chapters, in which case, I apologise. Character Design I would give a 4 as so far the interactions depict the distinction between individuals very well, but as someone who quite enjoys visualising the characters appearances, I feel that the book hasn't done justice on this part. World Background teased in the beginning (maybe I'm wrong. I thought it was tease) but I feel that it has the potential to blow up dramatically as the book progressed which is looking to be promising thus the 5 stars. All in all, the figure of this book looks bright and I'm heavily anticipating the author to live up to eat. Fantastic start to a book. Do recall that this is strictly my opinion, sponsored by my individual tastes, not a divine judgement. Great work author

Lovely novel. There's nothing really wrong with this novel. If you watch to nitpick, you can say that the stability of updates isn't good because this novel has been out for quite some time and only 28 chapters have been released at the time of this review but I choose to put my trust in the author and believe that the updates will become constant now. Keep updating please.

I love it. how frequently they update isn't that much but its fine I think its worth it, the story is fun to read and really interesting I hope it lasts a very long time, anyways

Fun story, I enjoyed the first chapter and the chemistry between the two characters first introduced, I hope you continue to write fun little banter between the characters.

Well, well, well... isn't that a refreshing read! The story and especially the interaction between the characters is amazing and i loved it! Good job author!

A unique story in a unique universe with a unique MC in a unique situation. Quite unique isn't it. Its a great story and the author has a creative mind as putting this story together the way they did was brilliant. would recommend this book as you won't be waisting your time diving into the world and the characters presented. I have put it in my library and wait on new chapters.

I can see that you have a very creative imagination. I love the background when you explained the rules of the world. The use of elemental magic also got me interested. The best but is the humour between the characters! Keep it up!

how can i put it into words without making any spoilers, couse it's so amazing!! prankly speaking 'SOME' of the plot was a cliche that you can usually encounter in other fictional novel or even anime. However, the characters turn it all into diamonds, instantly, and give a different vibes and approach than usual so it produce a critical but fascinating master peace in every scenario. the whole progress of the story was easily to familiarize and didn't need any heavy thinking i really enjoyed reading it for the whole time, rooting for the author! Good to read!!! excellent characters!!! fascinating dialogues!!! must read!!!

Okay, let's start with writing quality, it's not exactly the best as the author tends to mix up past and present tense a lot.. It kinda causes a few issues with reading. another thing is that author misses a few words while writing causing a few bumps, not much but it's still there. Story development is quite good and at a pace that is not too fast or too slow which I am okay with. Character design is really good actually. Author tends to describe each character in detail, allowing readers to fully picture the individual in their mind. nice job with that. updating stability.. well it's just starting so that's not important. World background... can't say much due to the number of chaps. But so far it's looking good. Keep up the good work author. I look forward to seeing how this goes.

Amazing story with captivating characters. The grammar is very good and overall the story is very neat and interesting. Waiting for more chapters.

This novel is AMAZING!!! The creativity of the plot is what impressed me the most. I have no idea how the author thought of such a plot but it's so good. The writing quality is great. The story is developed in a way that'll attract readers immediately. I would say that the plot is a bit complex. But I didn't find it confusing because of the great descriptions, writing style and methodological plot development. The world background is admirable. We are yet to see more of this imaginary world, yet what we've seen so far is the evidence of a well-built world. The characters are impressive, interesting, and at times funny. I loved them. This book got everything needed for a good novel. Keep up the good work author! I wish you the best of luck!

Can't believe I almost cried while reading chapter 12, I really enjoyed reading this novel, Love the character design, this book really got me attached to it, the creativity is beyond explanation I love this novel, keep it up, author !! HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!!