Review Detail of R_F_T_S in When The Mob Villain Doesn’t Want To Die [BL]

Okay, let's start with writing quality, it's not exactly the best as the author tends to mix up past and present tense a lot.. It kinda causes a few issues with reading. another thing is that author misses a few words while writing causing a few bumps, not much but it's still there. Story development is quite good and at a pace that is not too fast or too slow which I am okay with. Character design is really good actually. Author tends to describe each character in detail, allowing readers to fully picture the individual in their mind. nice job with that. updating stability.. well it's just starting so that's not important. World background... can't say much due to the number of chaps. But so far it's looking good. Keep up the good work author. I look forward to seeing how this goes.