Review Detail of Shade_Arjuun in When The Mob Villain Doesn’t Want To Die [BL]

okay... this review is as at 15 chapters.. Writing quality is definitely a 5.. the use of words is quite clean and there are only a handful of grammar mistakes that I have encountered through the course of the chapters I've sampled. Well done author. Story Development is a 4 as I'm not entirely sure if the flow is as attractive as I would expect. Its not slow but I feel an accelerating could be achieved to make the book more fun to read. Perhaps this isn't valid in the later chapters, in which case, I apologise. Character Design I would give a 4 as so far the interactions depict the distinction between individuals very well, but as someone who quite enjoys visualising the characters appearances, I feel that the book hasn't done justice on this part. World Background teased in the beginning (maybe I'm wrong. I thought it was tease) but I feel that it has the potential to blow up dramatically as the book progressed which is looking to be promising thus the 5 stars. All in all, the figure of this book looks bright and I'm heavily anticipating the author to live up to eat. Fantastic start to a book. Do recall that this is strictly my opinion, sponsored by my individual tastes, not a divine judgement. Great work author