Reviews of What if? Severus Snape.
What if? Severus Snape.
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The author here, I hope you like the story. This isn't reincarnation or transportation story but an amalgam story of both harry potter world and marvel comics. I want you all to give it a try and I will say you won't regret it.
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Perfect example of a 5 stars worthy fanfic. For those who wanted to see a different ending for severus, this is the right fanfic for you. World background is well done, The author is slowly showing us more things as the story progresses. Character design is where this story becomes different from other ff’s on webnovel, All carachter have a lot of depth, flaws and emotions. Grammar is perfect. Story development is immersive and makes you want to read more. give it a try and you won’t regret it.
All good except the writing quality. There are some missing words, placing commas in the wrong place, sometimes there's also 'awkward' wording, and the way the author write the scene is too simple. It's like looking at history log rather than telling a story. Add more detail. The english is already good, but it's annoying when this kind of things happen. Overall a good story, but still need a good amount of proofread and fixing the parts that need to be fix, from ch 1 until latest chapters. It got the same problem.
Nice fanfic. .......... ....... ...... ...... The first thing I did was to have the same problem with the same time as the first time in the future and the other is a great way to get the best out of the way and I have to say that I am not a fan of the most important things to do in the future and the other is a great way to get the best out of the way.
It is really good It is very good and I hope that the author continues with his work and maintains the quality that he manages until now I can't wait for the return of the marauders and to see how they are treated and also the development of the plot of victor also considering that his gen x is based on the shadow monarch i cant wait for him to get the heart and would also like to see more shadows added to his kingdom will igrid appear? sorry if there is any mistake or original language is not english
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