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No, I can still reply to you. I never saw it directly. I just replied to it as soon as I got the notification.

I mean he will remove it once they will deal with his parents and Reg overcomes his insecurities. And yes, while it takes time, people will overcome their insecurities or deal with them in a healthy. And no problem with the nitpick, everyone has that ick at something.👍

Yes, yes. That is what I mentioned. That curse can be cast again. I mentioned that. And that is the reason Severus didn't remove the curse or can't remove it since it will alert the caster. Finally. 👍

Yes, but not fully. Just because you say that he needs to deal with it does not mean you don't do anything. It was not Reg's thought, it is a curse, so it is important to reduce its effects while Reg recovers himself

Couldn't save. I think the word was erased.

thanks.

Hey moron, if you don't like crossovers don't read the story. It was in the fucking synopsis that it was an amalgam. A review is for the story, not your preference.

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I mean yes, it is grey-scaled but his intention is good and comes from a place of goodness but he refuses to accept that it is from his heart. And I feel, Severus is not underdeveloped but in development. He has changed a lot. While I understand it might seem like it. Since most of the novel is from his pov, he looks like an observer, and others' development shines. I feel like I have at least presented his inner conflict at the moment. For a long novel, I can't rush his development nor can I just give him his defeat easily. Thanks.

1st. The love interest is their choice.2nd. I haven't given him any new powers, and I am not willing to. Not now.3rd. While yes, after the first 10 chapters, he hasn't fought anyone other than the vault. I was more leaning towards cunning and relationship during this time. 4th. His mental struggles aren't portrayed directly in this chapter, I have been leading up to this, and how some of those healed him but it is still there. Not completely gone.5th.About the inferno thing, I explained, it was built up from before, while yes, I should have given more deposition from his side about how he was struggling, I wrote myself in a corner as it was from his POV and I didn't want to write too much as the fix was already long. And everyone who was able to do that task was not just anyone, no she is Merlin's daughter, lady aroma, an important powerful character in Marvel.5th. Yes, as you said not many would not stick for a big novel, that needs groundwork. I understand. I can't just add an organization, or a company without properly introducing the characters. That is why it was long.6th. You raised a good point, it would be boring if Severus just won, but he has only ever fought one duel, two cursed vaults, that's it. I will leave you to understand that it is coming.7th. This novel is not just one character, it has many that take up some space, at least I am trying to. 8th. About the brawler, yes, you are correct. I hoped you picked up my intent behind due to your analysis but alas. It will clear in future. And yes, one wizarding duel coming up for you.8th, if you can point out what was those glaring issues that suck the fun out, I will be careful the next time.And thank you for your honesty.

Man, I understand it. I too hold the same fear. I don't want to write myself in the corner by giving him new powers. About boggarts, even if I mentioned them now, they will be useful 50 or 100 chapters later. And this is a marvel as well. It will take a long time before I consider giving him new powers other than the progression of his own powers. And his power__a secret? They are not what they seem.

He is not going to be dark wizard like those evil protag.

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Read the aux chapter. [img=recommend]

Yes, but that skill itself is flawed. It isolates them, leaving them blank not with a mask. So here, she knew that he was blocking it out completely due to something and she knew him long enough to know something was wrong from all the transformations but not what. As for the eye thing, yeah as you said it was for their connection. Sometimes people close to us know what going on despite how hard we try. 👍

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He hasn't really forgotten, he just willfully ignored his name. Since he couldn't find much about the gene that's it. And what you said is true.

This one that I could find and his hair is not that short.

Yeah