kys you disgusting pedo

tbh i like ur way better the guy seems annoying from the way he speaks to the rob

the wifes of the lords are called lady" " not mrs mrs mr and ms arent used in GOT you can use ser for men aswell

u need to double check your chapters before u upload them because theres a lot of easy to change mistakes like calling aurors oros and other basic things

u need to double check your chapters before u upload them because theres a lot of easy to change mistakes like calling aurors oros

fast progression

is this on hiatus?

do you have an upload schedule?

its a good fanfic but the problem is that there are plot holes and also the grammar isnt good, the author forgets full stops/periods, puts big gaps in the middle of a monologue which makes the story less fun to read because it just pulls the quality down a lot even though the story is really good

AIDs brothers

can you change the - into speech marks, its harder to read without them

thx for the chapter

is this on hiatus?

thats probably the most stupid thing ive ever read, why would he not use the last wish, if he didnt want to have any more cheats he couldve atleast wished to be born a noble or something

your storys good but you need to fix the grammar and spelling, it makes the story harder to read so people will just drop it

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why did u delete your mha fanfic?

this is the best written fanfic ive ever read. from the way the story flows and the way the author perfectly captures the essence of the characters and builds onto them to the way you cant even tell that this isnt an original story becasue of how well written this is.

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rewrite