Moonwriting
Not going to lie I wasn't expecting much But reading up to the chapter 5 Layla, I see you've done a good job depicting how a woman with no help or backing can be wound around. You did a good job with the dark settings and relationships between the character and I can only hope that your writing improves and grows as you go on. I'm looking forward to future chapters
Intriguing story. Both Erika and Sebastian have a miserable life and I really hope they'll get some kind of happiness, although is hard to see how. I'll just have to keep reading. Althought there are some writing mistakes here and there, the way you write is compeling, clearly showing their tragedies. It has potential and I hope I won't cry crocodile tears at the end. :))
I want to start by saying your story development is really nice. From the very first scene I was caught and I really like that. Although there are a few grammatical errors here and there, it is something that can be ignored or fixed later. I like the book so I will keep reading. Keep up the good work.
The storyline so far is great. I like that you didn't sugarcoat any of the harshnesses of the mafia - it adds to the realness and reading experience. It's not all lovey-dovey romance, it's a real-life drama which I like and I don't see often here. The flow of the story is great and it leaves you wanting more. Keep up the good work!
Nice and fresh story l must say.... There is a kind of drama l want in every novel that l love to read.... The first thing that grabbed my attention were the character names. I loved the character settings and the way you described each and every scenes in the plot.. The thought process of the author is a must to be appreciated. Keep the good work Author! Best of luck!đ
another great work from my one of the favourite author... Although its a very eary to review this story but still wanted to bcz l know how nicely this author write her every story ... as l am fan of her previous work, l can tell this story is also amazing .. Like the synopsis is what it says... everyone will attract to this story automatically bcz of its synopsis... Also the story background is nice as the characters... the ml has already caught my heartđ¤đ¤