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Utilizing a mafia boss

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DamnedChicken
DamnedChickenLv4DamnedChicken

A perfect setting for mafia novel . Not too much fluff in the start as it should be.

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Rainandstorm
RainandstormLv2Rainandstorm

The story is really interesting, I couldn't just take my eyes off the screen 😅.. I totally love the book.. kudos to the amazing author

FA3zy
FA3zyLv3FA3zy

This story is worth it. I read urban A lot but this one is one of a kind. keep it up auThor..i can’t seem to take my mind of it.

Sakura_Charmash
Sakura_CharmashLv2Sakura_Charmash

It has the rough edges that a story like this wants, no white knights but a bunch of intriguing characters in varying shades of gray. Honestly, from the get go, you'd want to know what happens next. A very intriguing story indeed!

jag_writes
jag_writesLv1jag_writes

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closedmyaccount
closedmyaccountLv1closedmyaccount

The starting itself hooked me up and the storyline is pretty intense and smooth at the same time, the whole mafia thing peaked my curiosity and I will definitely read till the end, keep up the good work ❤️❤️

Nyxxie_Auclair
Nyxxie_AuclairLv1Nyxxie_Auclair

A wonderful work right here. I love how it's in different pov so I can understand the characters in depth. Keep up your hard work author and I love Sebastian and Erika already

Daarcsign_07
Daarcsign_07Lv3Daarcsign_07

Not going to lie I wasn't expecting much But reading up to the chapter 5 Layla, I see you've done a good job depicting how a woman with no help or backing can be wound around. You did a good job with the dark settings and relationships between the character and I can only hope that your writing improves and grows as you go on. I'm looking forward to future chapters

Iwrite12008
Iwrite12008Lv1Iwrite12008

I read a few chaps, and I would suggest diving in and formulating your opinion. It might be good or bad depending on your taste. Nothing more to say!

Pole_Star
Pole_StarLv2Pole_Star

Promising story with good character development... liked how the events have been weaved together and the characters have been outlined... great read....looking forward to more...good job author👍

Cristina_5911
Cristina_5911Lv12Cristina_5911

Intriguing story. Both Erika and Sebastian have a miserable life and I really hope they'll get some kind of happiness, although is hard to see how. I'll just have to keep reading. Althought there are some writing mistakes here and there, the way you write is compeling, clearly showing their tragedies. It has potential and I hope I won't cry crocodile tears at the end. :))

NobleRemmy
NobleRemmyLv3NobleRemmy

amazing.... I am really liking the flow of the story. how great the ML was presented and the FL, even though degraded has perseverance. I can't wait to read about how they co-exist and how their romance will blossom. great work author 👏

Jenival_Enyia
Jenival_EnyiaLv12Jenival_Enyia

I want to start by saying your story development is really nice. From the very first scene I was caught and I really like that. Although there are a few grammatical errors here and there, it is something that can be ignored or fixed later. I like the book so I will keep reading. Keep up the good work.

Night_of_Dreams
Night_of_DreamsLv4Night_of_Dreams

I love the intro of the first chapter, cool lead, gotta say it it was intense first chapter dude.. the writing, background and characters are great and well detailed.. great job author

VeraMera
VeraMeraLv10VeraMera

The storyline so far is great. I like that you didn't sugarcoat any of the harshnesses of the mafia - it adds to the realness and reading experience. It's not all lovey-dovey romance, it's a real-life drama which I like and I don't see often here. The flow of the story is great and it leaves you wanting more. Keep up the good work!

Khadija_Mayo
Khadija_MayoLv1Khadija_Mayo

Nice and fresh story l must say.... There is a kind of drama l want in every novel that l love to read.... The first thing that grabbed my attention were the character names. I loved the character settings and the way you described each and every scenes in the plot.. The thought process of the author is a must to be appreciated. Keep the good work Author! Best of luck!😋

_Rockbison_
_Rockbison_Lv3_Rockbison_

another great work from my one of the favourite author... Although its a very eary to review this story but still wanted to bcz l know how nicely this author write her every story ... as l am fan of her previous work, l can tell this story is also amazing .. Like the synopsis is what it says... everyone will attract to this story automatically bcz of its synopsis... Also the story background is nice as the characters... the ml has already caught my heart🤭🤭

Renee_Writes
Renee_WritesLv10Renee_Writes

Your book is very nice and it's interesting. Don't forget to contact me... via Facebook please for the free proofreading you wanted me to do for you. It'll be easier to show you the corrections there. Thank you

Ninestar619_5803
Ninestar619_5803Lv4Ninestar619_5803

This book is great. The story has a lot of terror sent when you read about the mc. the description of him is good. The writing style is awesome and it's easy to understand. good story. like it will read on

_Neko_Sensei_
_Neko_Sensei_Lv1_Neko_Sensei_

The story is good. The ml is brutal. People who love mafia stories can read it. There are very small mistakes that can be ignored easily. Best wishes for the author <3