The story needs a lot of work but it has an auspicious start, please keep up with the update author. can't wait to read more[img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]
Paragraph needs to be edited but still there's an idea up there. hope you could improve your writing skills in the future[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story has a good start and an auspicious setting and plot but it needs more effort and assistance to cultivate the story more. Nice work in all[img=recommend]
The story is a piece of art, really intriguing and glue you to your phone, the characters are unique especially Eddie. Am not a fan of Hero books but this is one special one to read. can't wait to read more
This story is so detailed and intriguing, it sticks you like a glue and not tiring to read, and also the mc is a unique character...love it. Keep up the good work author