bro? who hurt you?

That's a nice chapter... Indeed I was pretty good at writing

Whew... The story is definitely has a strong opening. It instantly grips you with its unique take and immerses you in.The only problem i can mark is probably the pacing, which feels slow at the start.Looking forward to seeing what is going to come next.

Neat!

banger of a opening

Sadly, that's not possible

too relatable

the name Cedric reminds me of harry potter series.

The way author describe certain things along with a banger of a opening chapter. I was instantly hooked. Looking forward for future updates!

Well, that was certainly a good ride. Without a doubt, the story is a fresh outlook on the genre and pretty compelling to read. So far it's been awesome. let's see where it goes...

The one quality i can relate to!!!!being dirt poor :⁠'⁠(

You'll see kid. You'll see

Impeccable writing is a rarity in a web novel. But this story right here got that covered for you. The flow of sentences is natural, and the vocabulary is rich enough for the readers to enjoy it thoroughly, without being irritated by the unwanted repetitions. Though I haven't caught up to the latest chapters just yet. I think I have read enough to leave a review. I am a wandering reader, I don't care about genre or lead as long as the story is good. As such, I have to say, this story has one of the most interesting hooks In all of the novels I have ever read. Without a doubt, it easily comes into my top 5 FL stories. It is a melodramatic slice of life, a little serious at times with unforeseen twists and turns waiting at every corner. It was a treat to read for me from the very first chapter to the current 158th one. At last, I just want to thank the author for keeping this free. Now I want to catch up on this story as soon as possible.

It's 4 am right now. And I can say with certainty. My sleep sacrifice! It was absolutely worth it.

Sorry for being the nitpicker.... but you should correct this paragraph, author.

Depends on you man..... The way you can get the most out of the novel.

Well here is an overview of all the tags for you- Romance- Kind of a subplot to the story... Won't be too important. But the progress can be rather slow... I like slow burns. Antihero,action, adventurer- Well... this is pretty much self explanatory. R18- There will be brutal topics in the novel and mature scenes.... Strong to weak- A little bit of spoiler*- M.C isn't a god like being from the very start of the novel... he is weak. I'll argue even too weak in the start. As for the strong acting weak tag- It is far in the novel.... At the current chapters. The best explanation i can give you is... stuff happened and this is how it ended up. You will have to read it in order to understand it completely. Also currently the academy arc is going on...So that explains the tag.

You do have a point, but you didn't focused on the situation i think.... Any Normal person might have been able to gather what was going on from that much information... but not Arsh. Because unlike normal person he didn't had extensive knowledge of how the world works. he never ventured outside of his village before, neither he ever attended an school to learn the so called common sense. He was deprived of many types of common norms unlike other people. If you think i wrote this without thinking through, and just for the surprise effect. Then you are very wrong. If you want to continue the story or not is your choice entirely though...

Hmm... Hope you like it, though.

The starting of the book was without a doubt very enticing. It introduces the characters perfectly and integrates them into the amazingly crafted world. 9/10 would recommend!!