Review Detail of Cristina_5911 in Utilizing a mafia boss

Intriguing story. Both Erika and Sebastian have a miserable life and I really hope they'll get some kind of happiness, although is hard to see how. I'll just have to keep reading. Althought there are some writing mistakes here and there, the way you write is compeling, clearly showing their tragedies. It has potential and I hope I won't cry crocodile tears at the end. :))