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Twists of life

Loctovia

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Ramirys
RamirysLv13Ramirys

So far the story seems really good. The author does a good job of setting things up and things like conversations between friends sounds very natural and realistic. I was instantly hooked onto the story after a few minutes of reading.

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TurtleMaster6319
TurtleMaster6319Lv4TurtleMaster6319

Love the story so far, don't get me wrong. But he did her dirty and for that. I'mma go cry and eat a tub of ice-cream now. Peace out. Imma keep reading tho, I recommend it!

histo_shizuka
histo_shizukaLv1histo_shizuka

This story has a great premise, and it does a good job of having a diverse set of characters! Amanda is sweet and down to earth, and her story is definitely one to watch out for.

AlicoleChronicler
AlicoleChroniclerLv3AlicoleChronicler

Twists of Life is the perfect title for this book. There are so many unexpected turns in the plot that I couldn't predict any of the most exciting events. I enjoyed reading about the characters' backgrounds. It helped me understand their behavior later on in the story when I was surprised to see that their decisions weren't the ones I thought they would make. This is a beautiful story about love and life!

TheSuccessor
TheSuccessorLv2TheSuccessor

I like that it immediately starts off with dialogue and that it helps us understand their certain actions. Great writing and I hope you continue to write like this.

Juliet_Omuadona
Juliet_OmuadonaLv4Juliet_Omuadona

The book is intriguing, I just wanted to check out a few chapters but I stay gue to my screen. A must read [img=update][img=update] Check it out and you will be glad, you did.

Nora_Star
Nora_StarLv13Nora_Star

The author has a cute writing style, the novel flows smoothly, you can easily relate to it and I think it's very promising! Give it a shot!

Ultimatedaywriter
UltimatedaywriterLv4Ultimatedaywriter

I like the pacing most of all about this story. The characters are very recognizable because they are given time to meet the audience.

NotBeatrix
NotBeatrixLv2NotBeatrix

The writing is fairly good, albeit there are some gramamtical errors here and there, but overall the author excells on characters. You can really tell each character has a personality and voice. I fell in love in Amanda's friend Tasha because boy she's one hilarious ride. The love story going on between Amanda and Eddy is something I'm curious to see develop out in the upcoming chatpers. So far, I like it and I think readers should give this book a shot!

Deranwoods
DeranwoodsLv13Deranwoods

It is extraordinary. I love your story. your style is unique and your plot is well organized. you deserve a big applause. keep it up and well done.

MatildasBT
MatildasBTLv1MatildasBT

A good romance book. It starts sweetly, but it will soon evolve in a bit of drama. Its more of a slice of life, but I do like how this author describes the different parts of the life a girl after gettin her heart broken by an unrequited love. Great book, I will continue reading your chapters, so good luck!

Morororo
MorororoLv3Morororo

I'm not into romance usually, I find it kinda odd. Great start on the first chapter although I dislike greedy characters. But, I don't mind, it's how you write so do your best. Great job!

RomanceFanatic028
RomanceFanatic028Lv4RomanceFanatic028

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Loctovia
LoctoviaAuthorLoctovia

Shameless author here again. I meant to give myself 5 stars but i'm sure how it turned into four. Anyway that gives me an excuse to talk about my story again and use this to give myself 5 stars .. hehehehe... I am really in love with the progress now and i only hope that the novel lives up to its name: Twists of life It's a very interesting read and you will absolutely love. Just take a leap of faith!!!.. and you will be blown away :)

Ultimatedaywriter
UltimatedaywriterLv4Ultimatedaywriter

I like the story its very insightful. The story is well written and I hope Amanda well for her love life. Check it out its worth the read.

GlobalGift
GlobalGiftLv4GlobalGift

I feel for amanda and i am so sorry For Amanda, i hope that the author would make her love life interesting [img=update][img=update][img=update]

Najad_Sahari
Najad_SahariLv14Najad_Sahari

This has been an enjoyable read. Well written, straight to the point yet some surprises along the way. I love the FL character, she started as a naive, somewhat gullible young lady but in actual fact a prodigy. The ML - hmmm , even full of surprises . The author impart family and social values that are sadly deteriorating in our current world. These values are beautifully embedded and author drew comparisons with other situations. The background stories are kept to just background and that kept me glued to the story (else I get distracted ). A good, succinctly written story with all ends tied nicely.

Jolan_Hildebrandt
Jolan_HildebrandtLv1Jolan_Hildebrandt

My biggest thing is where is the inner conflict? If eddy is the best friend a natural fear is losing that friendship to a bad breakup. I'd push that a little more in the first three chapters. The main characters friends are spot on, though nosey intrusive eager to live vicariously through the main character