Loctovia
Twists of Life is the perfect title for this book. There are so many unexpected turns in the plot that I couldn't predict any of the most exciting events. I enjoyed reading about the characters' backgrounds. It helped me understand their behavior later on in the story when I was surprised to see that their decisions weren't the ones I thought they would make. This is a beautiful story about love and life!
The writing is fairly good, albeit there are some gramamtical errors here and there, but overall the author excells on characters. You can really tell each character has a personality and voice. I fell in love in Amanda's friend Tasha because boy she's one hilarious ride. The love story going on between Amanda and Eddy is something I'm curious to see develop out in the upcoming chatpers. So far, I like it and I think readers should give this book a shot!
A good romance book. It starts sweetly, but it will soon evolve in a bit of drama. Its more of a slice of life, but I do like how this author describes the different parts of the life a girl after gettin her heart broken by an unrequited love. Great book, I will continue reading your chapters, so good luck!
Shameless author here again. I meant to give myself 5 stars but i'm sure how it turned into four. Anyway that gives me an excuse to talk about my story again and use this to give myself 5 stars .. hehehehe... I am really in love with the progress now and i only hope that the novel lives up to its name: Twists of life It's a very interesting read and you will absolutely love. Just take a leap of faith!!!.. and you will be blown away :)
This has been an enjoyable read. Well written, straight to the point yet some surprises along the way. I love the FL character, she started as a naive, somewhat gullible young lady but in actual fact a prodigy. The ML - hmmm , even full of surprises . The author impart family and social values that are sadly deteriorating in our current world. These values are beautifully embedded and author drew comparisons with other situations. The background stories are kept to just background and that kept me glued to the story (else I get distracted ). A good, succinctly written story with all ends tied nicely.
My biggest thing is where is the inner conflict? If eddy is the best friend a natural fear is losing that friendship to a bad breakup. I'd push that a little more in the first three chapters. The main characters friends are spot on, though nosey intrusive eager to live vicariously through the main character