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Ultimatedaywriter

Ultimatedaywriter

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I like mixing different genres together in my stories.

2018-09-26 JoinedUnited States
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  • Ultimatedaywriter
    Ultimatedaywriter3mth
    Replied to Obito_Uchiha_8343

    Waking up from a lack of stimili basically.

    No words had ever felt so foreboding to my mind that they had only begun restarting. A choice was that I had been lost for so long in the nothing that was eternity that such a concept had slipped my mind long ago. My life had long ago been consumed by the infinite experience of nothingness. Even my name had become nothing more than a distant thread of memory.
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    The Agency Gamer
    Others · Ultimatedaywriter
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  • Ultimatedaywriter
    Ultimatedaywriter3mth
    Replied to Zenithnovels

    alright I will try it out.

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    Angels and Monster Girls
    Games · Ultimatedaywriter
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  • Ultimatedaywriter
    Ultimatedaywriter3mth
    Replied to Alias_scaleheart

    thank you I really appreciate the review. and don't worry I have no plans for him to lose faith with the angels.

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    Angels and Monster Girls
    Games · Ultimatedaywriter
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  • Ultimatedaywriter
    Ultimatedaywriter3mth
    Replied to Sabaroth_zarkiel

    The MC is going to cuck the hell out of some fallen heroes. And Yuri sounds like fun I will plan up some scenes.

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    Angels and Monster Girls
    Games · Ultimatedaywriter
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  • Ultimatedaywriter
    Ultimatedaywriter5mth
    Replied to kalila_dawn

    I do have a discord but its kind of dead I can give you a link and I'll start leaving a link for anyone interested.

    Ch 3 CH3: Dragon's Lure
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    The First Sage
    Fantasy · Ultimatedaywriter
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  • Ultimatedaywriter
    Ultimatedaywriter6mth
    Replied to Supreme_V

    No that is a metaphor.

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    I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly
    Eastern · Supreme_V
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  • Ultimatedaywriter
    Ultimatedaywriter6mth
    Posted

    I like Hinduism mainly because of Asura's wrath, Record of Ragnaroc, and Shin Megami Tensie. A series with a guy legitimately worshipping Shiva is awesome I can't wait for more.

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    Lord of Business
    Urban · LordShivaStories
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  • Ultimatedaywriter
    Ultimatedaywriter6mth
    Posted

    The plot is pretty good and it hits right from the start. The exhusband is an abusive guy with small penis syndrome from what I can tell. The first chapter grips the reader emotionally and keeps them there.

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    Contract Gone Wrong: My Ex-husband Is My Boss
    Urban · Husniya_S
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  • Ultimatedaywriter
    Ultimatedaywriter6mth
    Replied to Supreme_V

    While info dumps can be boring you have a lot of ground to cover. I would say try and make an action scene or something with dialogue to use the information instead of firing it out. That doesn't mean you can't drop in information especially if its something the MC knows or has recently learned. As a writer its up to you to decide how much is too much. I'm know to have the opposite problem I don't give enough information leaving readers confused. Its one of those things where you need to be conscious of and practice. I hope I'm making sense man. But seriously a good start to your novel in my opinion.

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    I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly
    Eastern · Supreme_V
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  • Ultimatedaywriter
    Ultimatedaywriter6mth
    Replied to kenrick_lindo

    You know it I think it gave her more character than the MC's mother.

    Ch 2 Rewrite CH2: I Don't Trust Him
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    Death World Menagerie Nightmare
    Fantasy · Ultimatedaywriter
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  • Ultimatedaywriter
    Ultimatedaywriter6mth
    Posted

    So far no major grammar errors or anything that took me out of the book. The main character has an interesting system with hard limits which always makes things more interesting. The story has a lot of potential give it a read if you like cultivation novels.

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    I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly
    Eastern · Supreme_V
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  • Ultimatedaywriter
    Ultimatedaywriter6mth
    Replied to Dark_PersonJJ

    That is a possibility but dungeons need to follow certain rules in exchange for their power its in their nature. So while they could become food for Tera the can just as easily become extremely powerful and leave.

    Ch 6 CH6: To Kuoh
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    The New Future Timeline
    Video Games · Ultimatedaywriter
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  • Ultimatedaywriter
    Ultimatedaywriter6mth
    Replied to Dark_PersonJJ

    He's sending them over to the cabin in the dungeon.

    Ch 6 CH6: To Kuoh
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    The New Future Timeline
    Video Games · Ultimatedaywriter
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  • Ultimatedaywriter
    Ultimatedaywriter6mth
    Replied to Dark_PersonJJ

    well while he isn't top dog in dxd if he was fully trained he would be a continent buster. I would put him mid tier.

    Ch 6 CH6: To Kuoh
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    The New Future Timeline
    Video Games · Ultimatedaywriter
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  • Ultimatedaywriter
    Ultimatedaywriter8mth
    Replied to Daoist_Culture

    Yes it is a harem.

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    Barbarian Hentai Hero
    Fantasy · Ultimatedaywriter
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  • Ultimatedaywriter
    Ultimatedaywriter10mth
    Posted

    Alright you might not like my review but here it is. I'm not always into slice of life type works but this one is good and has a steady pace. The dialogue and I'm guilty of this too may need to be read aloud by the author in the editing process. Some of the wording is more formal then the context requires but that is my incredibly specific nit pick. As in if I absolutely had to find a flaw this really good work that was it.

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    The Fantastic Five.
    Teen · Prajnya Shriyan
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  • Ultimatedaywriter
    Ultimatedaywriter10mth
    Posted

    It has a lot of promise, a great premise, and plenty of heart. I can't see any overt errors which is great. The present tense may be a little hard for some people to get used to but that would be my biggest complaint.

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    Reborn in Naruto with Karma Seal
    Anime & Comics · TranslatorKun
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  • Ultimatedaywriter
    Ultimatedaywriter10mth
    Replied to Axzile

    die is the singular form of dice can you english.

    He rolled the die.
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    Multiverse Sect System
    Anime & Comics · Ultimatedaywriter
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  • Ultimatedaywriter
    Ultimatedaywriter10mth
    Replied to Lucifer_777

    I'm thinking about it.

    Ch 11 CH11
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    Multiverse Sect System
    Anime & Comics · Ultimatedaywriter
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  • Ultimatedaywriter
    Ultimatedaywriter11mth
    Replied to cabooseiscool_1

    Sirzechs has a dragon in his peerage.

    As a lazy devil, Rias knew when to take up opportunities when they presented themselves. Dragons were weird and often obsessive. She wanted to add Rias to her horde, but the devil heiress knew how to play that game. She would get the dragon to eat out of her hand and then get the dragon's scaley behind into her peerage.
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    Multiverse Sect System
    Anime & Comics · Ultimatedaywriter
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