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damm. This is a really beautiful novel that has a very light comedy tone. The author played the story very well from the first few chapters alone. The other people might be annoyed by the system because it just exists for comedy purposes. The system is like a rebellious teenager. That is just my first impression of this novel. Just great.
Sigh.. i wanted to give this one a try due to the good reviews (i didnt look at the comment section yet) So i tried reading a bit and i only read half a chapter and couldnΒ΄t bear it to read it anymore. And thats coming from someone thats able to withstand reading mtlΒ΄s. The author makes quite alot of mistakes, about 5 in that half chapter. Not only that, i saw that the "protagonist" basicly added a few "!!!" to every sentence of his and his stupid decision at the start so i knew the mental age and eq of the mc and realized that he would annoy me, coming from someone that can live through young master cultivation novels, so i stopped reading this novel. Afterwards i saw the horrible top reviews from this novel and had no idea how this novel has such good reviews..
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Cliche? Sometimes, but instead of being annoyed, I found it to be fun. Cringe? Maybe yes maybe not. But for me, the story plotline is good. My only complaint is the number of words is getting smaller from chapter to chapter. This makes me think it's not worth it to exchange my fast pass or coins for unlocking your chapter.
Ive read this story to chapter 91 but i have to say the quality is good spelling and all that but reading this story gave me wip lash there is no real constant story to it everything changes and there is almost no link to the flow of the story caracters are half flushed i feel if the author could pick a direction in the story and stick with it and work on the caracters they could make a amazing story with their creativity but as this story is its almost as if its 4 stories half a.s.sedly stuffed together not to mention the random skips that unnecessarily jump time to progress plot where there was more to be shown and would of made the story far better with the detail at witch the story sorely lacks id rate this lower totally but the quality of the general writing was good and it seems to update often its the content of the story that lacks any real value and if the author can fix that could be a amazing writer as its the main part of any story