Review Detail of ELLOMYGELLO in Transmigrated as side character, i will steal all the heroines

Ive read this story to chapter 91 but i have to say the quality is good spelling and all that but reading this story gave me wip lash there is no real constant story to it everything changes and there is almost no link to the flow of the story caracters are half flushed i feel if the author could pick a direction in the story and stick with it and work on the caracters they could make a amazing story with their creativity but as this story is its almost as if its 4 stories half a.s.sedly stuffed together not to mention the random skips that unnecessarily jump time to progress plot where there was more to be shown and would of made the story far better with the detail at witch the story sorely lacks id rate this lower totally but the quality of the general writing was good and it seems to update often its the content of the story that lacks any real value and if the author can fix that could be a amazing writer as its the main part of any story