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So far (chapter 12), I think this story is very pleasant to read. The description of scenarios and emotions is different from other novels I usually see. Mainly, I like the protagonist's personality. Cold, but not like an iceberg. She has strong emotions like someone else. But at the same time, I think it was all too rushed (like ,a kiss in chapter 12??), I wanted better character development beyond the protagonist, especially the ML! It's just my opinion, but I think he fell in love very fast. Yes, in the history, several months have passed. But I didn't see every little interaction the two had, so it looked a little forced.
I have been enjoying the story this far. I appreciate how flawed the main character is, and I appreciate the growth that has taken place. Things don't come to her just because she's the lead, but because they all work for it. There's a fair bit of mystery and intrigue. I think at times the flow is a bit off, with the occasional grammatical errors, but overall, very good.
Beautiful work. I love how strong Lucia is as a character, as well as a female lead. She doesnt play to any weaker sterotypes, she is driven, and bold, and I really like that. I also enjoy how well paced the plot it. You get enough world building and events to keep you enaged, whilst simultaneously wondering where the story will go. A real hook. Quality of writing is also excellent. I dont think I have a bad word to say about this book! Amazing work author!
So here it is! This story is addictive. It felt like I was watching a movie similar to G. O. T or some interesting Greek/Roman themed movie. Totally captivating. This author knows what he/she is doing. Rooting for you. Please don't drop [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]