Interesting love story. Not really my cup of tea since I don't read romance novels, but this one might just satisfy your needs for romance. A few typos here and there need correction though, otherwise, it's good.
The marvelous background is depicted to perfection. Secondary characters and main characters are so life-like that the story becomes immersive. Added to my library. Good job author.
Not my usual type of read, but pretty good for a genre I'm not a fan of. The grammar issues are rare, the writing is neat, and it is a pleasure for the eyes. Good work author.
Good book, the writing style is original, there are some punctuation, typos, and grammar issue but nothing too glaring. The characters are well painted, though there may be a lot of them at the start of the novel to my taste; I prefer to familiarize myself with a handful of characters first.
A light-hearted story with a relatable character who looks like an average person. Borderline funny on the edges, fairly well written, the few grammar issues did not hinder my read. Good work author.
A touching story with calming vibes. Only two chapters so far but they set the tone for what may happen next. It feels a lot like a slice of life type of novel with a relaxing pace that cradles us as we keep on reading. Good work author.
A very good story with vivid scenes and characters that actually feel alive, not just 3D archetypes. Nicely written with a few minor grammar issues. I think I'll be binging this story for the next few days. Good work author
The story is well written as far as I can tell. There are a few repetitive words and turns of phrases but you generally gloss over them if you don't pay attention to those. The pacing is neither too fast nor too slow, well balanced in general. Characters are interesting, my personal favorite is the Monitor (yeah not the MC). What I like the most though are the dialogues. They have a living feeling to them. Overall it's pretty good. For improvement, I would suggest more
Alright, so far so good. I think you can improve on the writing but it's not something that can be learned in one go and the only efficient way to learn it is to be curious and keep writing. I'm not into romance so I can't exactly review this the way a romance reader would. But according to what I read, I think you're doing just fine. Keep up the good work, author.
Is he like the guy who's gonna take the other guy's place ahaha! xD
Lol, no worries xD
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