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Shona_Gillard
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I have been enjoying the story this far. I appreciate how flawed the main character is, and I appreciate the growth that has taken place. Things don't come to her just because she's the lead, but because they all work for it. There's a fair bit of mystery and intrigue. I think at times the flow is a bit off, with the occasional grammatical errors, but overall, very good.

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The villainess is worse the second time around

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Thank you so much for your feedback! I will take what you have said into account x

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