Uira
Hi! Good day! I'm just a person that have a wild imagination and a lil' good at drawing~
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Interesting start, with unknown world in the middle of forest. A good start that make you want to continue to figure out what happen to the whole world. The character have a great interactions with each other, but some exchange is difficult to understand because it's slightly off of the character. The plot is good and the pace is really slow and nice. Kudos for the writer, this story is on a right hand!
Overall the story is really good, a lifeless kid that down to adventure and challenge something that he would not challenge before. At some point, the relations between the character seems kinda off but it's still a good developement. The background is promising with it's sci-fi things, it's a fantasy of monster, adventure, and sci-fi. A unique combination indeed. Kudos for the writer to come up with this combination!
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Like the proverb said, "I look for a copper, but I found a gold instead." This is really a good work from the author. The world building is really excelent and the developement too. The first thing that catch my interest is how the writer put so much work on pin pointing the detail and good at the execution. However, the character building of some character's maybe have a loop hole but the overall is still good. Kudos for the writes! Keep your work!
Wait, so Fate is a person's name? What a twist, I didn't realize it :"