CollinX_BrainZ
The book is very nice to read. There are typos and grammar errors here and there, but that's every book. The story development is slow paced, but I like it like this. The MC is only a couple of months old as of now but hasn't made some astronomical growth in little time. I like the pacing because a lot of slow pace novels just have fast development of characters and/or powers with a slow story, but this one actually takes it slow. I havent seen Eternals but this barely feels like a fanfiction and more like an actual story. Some characters are a bit undeveloped like the MC's two sisters but I can relate to the characters although there has only been a few. The world background, well its a fanfiction so we don't really need it.
Went through twelve chapters in one shot. It was a brilliantly written work in first-person POV. The system was a little shocking for me, but to those enjoying all the statistics, this is going to be a good read for you guys. Writing can be more refined as there are small mistakes here and there, but they hardly disturb your reading experience. Overall, this is a beautifully made novel worth reading. Looking forward to more chapters. Keep up the good work, author. (Quite a Wow-Cover btw.)
Ok before writing this review, I read other reviews and there was a lot of not soo good comments, so first of all let's give my review. I can say this novel has too much big grammar, I can barely understand, I mean all kinds of people are going to read this novel, like those of a young age like me who can barely understand such grammars. I will say though author you have a wild imagination. There are just a few speck you can do to your writing: like make it in your own in a unique way, don't put too much things we see in other reincarnation novels, (better create) or change so it won't look like a FAN-FICTION. Try to change a few specks to the scene, but this novel is on the right direction. I'm sure u can be better. Also please do decrease the grammar a bit. *cough* 😓 I have to google to understand.👍
I started reading this novel and for the first few chapters, I was fully immersed and enjoying the ride. After those few chapters, the story felt eerily familiar but I chalked it upto me reading way too many webnovels and being a little too biased. However, the more I read, the more that I realised that this book is an exact copy paste of Supreme Magus. Literally. I don't know why the author claims that this is an original work. Sure, i understand incorporating elements of various novels into your work, but the plot line that this novel follows is almost similar to Supreme Magus, but a poorer version.
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