Review Detail of Jagabani in The Tribrid System

Ok before writing this review, I read other reviews and there was a lot of not soo good comments, so first of all let's give my review. I can say this novel has too much big grammar, I can barely understand, I mean all kinds of people are going to read this novel, like those of a young age like me who can barely understand such grammars. I will say though author you have a wild imagination. There are just a few speck you can do to your writing: like make it in your own in a unique way, don't put too much things we see in other reincarnation novels, (better create) or change so it won't look like a FAN-FICTION. Try to change a few specks to the scene, but this novel is on the right direction. I'm sure u can be better. Also please do decrease the grammar a bit. *cough* 😓 I have to google to understand.👍