The book is very nice to read. There are typos and grammar errors here and there, but that's every book. The story development is slow paced, but I like it like this. The MC is only a couple of months old as of now but hasn't made some astronomical growth in little time. I like the pacing because a lot of slow pace novels just have fast development of characters and/or powers with a slow story, but this one actually takes it slow. I havent seen Eternals but this barely feels like a fanfiction and more like an actual story. Some characters are a bit undeveloped like the MC's two sisters but I can relate to the characters although there has only been a few. The world background, well its a fanfiction so we don't really need it.
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