SHADOWSLASH
imagine watching Pokemon, only the Mc trainer is reincarnated as a pokemon monster so he can level up too. Now he fills his pokedex with all kinds of monsters as he expands his family of monsters, learning about each other's backstories and using strategy to help them all level up. Just like the game there's chapters full of grinding with tons of details for each battle. Occasionally the plot is sprinkled in as the world begins spiraling stronger. If you love the chapters filled with stats updates this is for you. In the chapters before 100 there are double chapters marked as .5 that are fully dedicated to showing everyone's current status. I'm afraid I started skipping those and some longer battles too. The concepts for the story are solid and fun.... each and every battle is extremely detailed, and you can easily track the Mc and all his underlings slowly getting more powerful. It is possible too have a bit too much detail.
After 20 chapters I just give up, While the grammar is kinda iffy to say the least but I read MTL a lot so that doesn't really bother me but what kills it for me is the story just moves too fast,he recruits to many subordinates to quickly (at ch 20 he already has 5 or 6) and no one actually has a personality, like calling any of these characters even 1 dimensional would be the highest of praise, so while the ideas of this story seems interesting, the author just doesn't have the ability to make it interesting at least not to where I stopped.
I don't know how to organize my words but... can I at least help you with the first few chapters? Because from what I can see, people are dropping this because of errors and fast-paced writing. I can tell that the story was intruiging but the structure and writing makes it bad. How can I at least contact you, or send you the version I think would be the best? I would love to help you with some of my time... Pwede ba? Sayang lang kasi... Gusto ko maimprove yung reading experience nila kaso they judge it immediately. I'm not really that good but at least I know that I can help you on uow to convey or express the idea in a best and simple way. Ugh! Parang nakakahiya tuloy! Keep writing!
Hey, love the concept and Seems like a Totally wicked novel. personally hate harem so i just read untill that point, and (up till then). Grammer and spelling is a bit all over the place. Would suggest editring more or gettinf someone else to help edit! Overall appreciate the work, but would suggest working more.
as an author myself. i liked this book's concept. the world building and so on, almost zero infodumps. but the only issue I had is the punctuation. don't choke your reader by ignoring the punctuation. and the rest. it's all good include the grammar that I could accept it since it's readable and understandable by myself.
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