Review Detail of John_Annex in THE SUMMONED MONSTER THAT IS SUMMONING ANOTHER MONSTER

After 20 chapters I just give up, While the grammar is kinda iffy to say the least but I read MTL a lot so that doesn't really bother me but what kills it for me is the story just moves too fast,he recruits to many subordinates to quickly (at ch 20 he already has 5 or 6) and no one actually has a personality, like calling any of these characters even 1 dimensional would be the highest of praise, so while the ideas of this story seems interesting, the author just doesn't have the ability to make it interesting at least not to where I stopped.