Review Detail of yohananmikhael in THE SUMMONED MONSTER THAT IS SUMMONING ANOTHER MONSTER

I don't know how to organize my words but... can I at least help you with the first few chapters? Because from what I can see, people are dropping this because of errors and fast-paced writing. I can tell that the story was intruiging but the structure and writing makes it bad. How can I at least contact you, or send you the version I think would be the best? I would love to help you with some of my time... Pwede ba? Sayang lang kasi... Gusto ko maimprove yung reading experience nila kaso they judge it immediately. I'm not really that good but at least I know that I can help you on uow to convey or express the idea in a best and simple way. Ugh! Parang nakakahiya tuloy! Keep writing!