Reviews of The lighted lantern (Arelins)

Your book title is great, the plot is very strong, the Characters are well-organised, and your writing style is unique. waiting for the next chapters.

The idea behind the story sounds original. The synopsis too is intriguing. I read the released chapters and I am genuinely looking forward for the coming chapters. Keep up the good work author 👍

This was a fresh idea like mine! I just hope you will continue writing this book since it has a lot of promise. I'll keep checking back for new chapters. wonderfully done, author! Engaging characters, an intriguing universe, and a captivating narrative.

It's my second time to write a review, but I found the concept here really fun and full of potential. I'd love to see where this goes! Keep up the good work!

It was intriguing story from the given synopsis and it was a nice start. The grammar needed to fix in order to understand more but I know you have a potential creating unique story. I've read some of like this and it was very rare. I suggest if you want to make it lighter and more exciting, you can use onomatopoeia instead of using much punctuation. But overall, it was a good novel and highly suggested to the readers. keep up the good work Author!

A different type of genre although a very good story line. It keeps me interested in what's gonna happen next and what is to come.

New concepts are always enjoyable and fun to read and this was no exception~ Off to a great start, and I can't wait for the rest of the chapters to be updated too! Please don't stop writing Author, you'll do awesome! All the best >.< [img=recommend][img=update]

Okay, to Be honest, I have never read a story like this before. It's so unique. Though, there were a lot of grammatical errors which I think you can fix. The story is nice tho. Nice write up! BUT, you need to update more, please dear author 🥺🥺

There's only one chapter (since the prologue one doesn't really count), all I can point out is that you need to fix your grammar cause there are many mistakes I found. The dialogues seems awkward to me and the placement of the sentences need be improve, which some of them, I already pointed it out in the comments. Also, I suggest you to not using the full stop before the question mark. E.g. "Okay.?" -> "Okay?" There are some author I've read their works which also did the same thing so I'm not surprised.

This seems to me like the beginning of a very sweet story. However, before you read my review, I must warn you. I have been quite frank. I did this in the hope that I might help you progress instead of giving you mindless praise. There are some aspects that might dissuade your readers to continue reading past the first chapter. First of all, your tenses. You switch from past to present, and it makes reading your story a bit tiresome. Sometimes you don’t use a tense at all. Or you use a form that doesn’t exist. (See: ‘begans’ in paragraph 2 chapter 2) Secondly, there’s a lack of proper sentence structure, and a lack of rhythm as well. I believe these are faults that can be eliminated by practice. I promise you, if you continue writing (and I hope you do), then your writing will improve. As long as you are kind to yourself and give yourself time. I hope I did not dissuade you from writing. I sincerely believe your story has potential. The best of luck!

Great start and a refreshing concept... waiting for updates author ... Good job👍

Very nice and refreshing start keep on going and make all complete so that it will be totally amazing

Somehow it is the best book. Funny and light-hearted From the title, it would seem like a run-of-the-mill kind of book., but after reading it you would find that it is surprisingly satisfying to read.

interesting characters and world background and good plot

wow! this was a good and new concept! I just hope that you will keep going with this novel since it has a lot of potential. I'll add this to my library and will keep waiting for more chapters! good job author!

I appreciate the author's tries to please her readers by making a totally new concept and hope that this novel doesn't get dropped! The concept of elements and stuff...i'm looking forward to it all auths!