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NyxReveuse

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Instagram- "nyx_reveuse" Fantasy | Romance Author ^.^

2021-12-22 JoinedGlobal
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  • NyxReveuse
    NyxReveuse1yr
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    I can't rate below 5 since I enjoyed the chapters a little too much xD Writing Quality: Couldn't spot a single grammar mistake, and no problem in reading or understanding the words and paragraphs. Great job Author 馃槄 Story Development: It's not too fast or too slow, perfect speed. It didn't get boring either since a cliffhanger made my curiosity rise and well, the system was one of the best parts 馃ぃ馃槀 Character design and World: The World hasn't been explored in detail THAT much so can't say much about it for now but the character design is quite awesome. The physical descriptions and stuff and the MC isn't one of those thirsty people since that gets boring sooner or later 馃槄馃ぃ Overall, 5/5 for everything, all the best Author~ Can't wait to read further on 馃ぉ

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  • NyxReveuse
    NyxReveuse1yr
    Commented

    I wonder what the suggestion was... Considering Nyx, it's gonna be something funny again 馃ぃ馃槀

    Ch 4 Scarlett
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  • NyxReveuse
    NyxReveuse1yr
    Commented

    Ok this is addicting ngl 馃ぃ馃槄

    Ch 3 Nyx
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  • NyxReveuse
    NyxReveuse1yr
    Commented

    馃槀馃槀馃槀

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  • NyxReveuse
    NyxReveuse1yr
    Commented

    Poor system...馃ぃ馃ぃ

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  • NyxReveuse
    NyxReveuse1yr
    Commented

    Oooh xD 馃槀馃ぃ

    The mysterious voice in his head belonged to Nyx, the name he had given to the "Sacred Dragon Emperor System."
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  • NyxReveuse
    NyxReveuse1yr
    Commented

    Going extremely interesting so far~

    Ch 2 Incident
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  • NyxReveuse
    NyxReveuse1yr
    Commented
    [It's pronounced 'catheter'.] The voice corrected him.
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  • NyxReveuse
    NyxReveuse1yr
    Commented

    ..... xD

    Ethan had noticed her subtle actions鈥攖he way she bit her lip and an ambiguous glint in her eyes as she looked at him. Ethan couldn't blame her, as even he was pleasantly surprised to see that his member was even larger than it had been in his previous life.
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  • NyxReveuse
    NyxReveuse1yr
    Commented

    What...?

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  • NyxReveuse
    NyxReveuse1yr
    Commented

    Hmm the system is pretty cool xD

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  • NyxReveuse
    NyxReveuse1yr
    Commented

    Oof yeah bad past...

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  • NyxReveuse
    NyxReveuse1yr
    Commented

    馃槀馃槀馃槀

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  • NyxReveuse
    NyxReveuse1yr
    Commented

    The system's quite helpful 馃ぃ

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  • NyxReveuse
    NyxReveuse1yr
    Commented

    Relatable reaction xD

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  • NyxReveuse
    NyxReveuse1yr
    Commented

    Well now you experienced what dying felt like...

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  • NyxReveuse
    NyxReveuse1yr
    Commented

    Cool one 馃槃

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  • NyxReveuse
    NyxReveuse1yr
    Commented

    Revenge

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  • NyxReveuse
    NyxReveuse1yr
    Commented

    That's some deep stuff ngl 馃槄馃

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  • NyxReveuse
    NyxReveuse1yr
    Commented

    Me everyday when I'm going to sleep xD

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