Hibah_Siddiqui
Newbie writer. Just publish the first novel. Into NFTs. I'm also an artist and a graphic designer. You can check my paintings here: @hisiart on Instagram. Currently pursuing a BSCS degree at university.
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He got pushed to the bed, the vampire lord towering over him. He was scared, will be he stripped away from his virginity? well after everything had happened, it wasn't the worst thing, but still… He tightly closed his eyes, he didn't want to see for what was coming for him. He wait for something bad to happen, but at the end he felt a kiss on his forehead, which surprised Orquídea. - Hibah_Siddiqui1yrReplied to MYCLONE
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I always appreciate new writers because I'm too 😁😅. Actually I'm serious because I know how hard is to keep writing and writing and see no to little appreciation or motivation at first. How hard is to find people who point out your mistake to make you more better. Author, if you ever find someone who demotivate you and told you to back off, don't ever listen to them just reply back with F*** off. 😎
- Hibah_Siddiqui1yrCommentedCh 2 Chapter II At the Devil's Ballroom
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I can imagine his face clearly 😘... Thanks to your detailed description.
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Ooooo~ I never give a chance to vampire stories before but after just reading the first chapter of your novel, you change my mind. I think I should give them a chance before. When I was reading your first chapter, I found it so smooth, I mean that reading wise I smoothly read the full chapter. That's a plus point from me to you. 😚😚😚
Ch 1 Chapter I "Everything is Lost" - Hibah_Siddiqui1yrCommented
Dear, instead of "his body" change it to "His body"...
his body was trembling under the vampire's large body, he felt like a prey at his predator's will. Orquídea felt Stephan's breath on his neck, then a pair of fangs brushed his skin. This is it, this will be his end, and he hoped it would be like that, he just wished for this nightmare to end. - Hibah_Siddiqui1yrCommented
Your story is very intriguing but I'm confused about the gender of Orquidea 😅 maybe I found the answer later in the story I guess... Overall writing style is good. 😘
He got pushed to the bed, the vampire lord towering over him. He was scared, will be he stripped away from his virginity? well after everything had happened, it wasn't the worst thing, but still… He tightly closed his eyes, he didn't want to see for what was coming for him. He wait for something bad to happen, but at the end he felt a kiss on his forehead, which surprised Orquídea. - Hibah_Siddiqui1yrReplied to TheQuietestVoice
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Dear, just correct the little wording here from "you just think your all that" to "you just think by yourself all that" 😊 and when writing the dailogue put a comma before the end of the dialogue if haven't defined who said that. For example; "I'm fine, don't worry," he said. Overall love your story... and has so much potential 💖💖. Plz don't mind my comment, I'm also new to writing and many people point out my mistakes like this. 😊😊
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Is he going to kill me? - Hibah_Siddiqui1yrCommented
That's sad 😢. I hope the father actually cares.
"Whatever I got to get to work anyways!" I take off as soon as the light turned green not even pausing to look back and just start running towards my job. I know he's right in my heart, but it still hurts to hear. The only thing people saw when they looked at me was my father and how great he is and how much he "cares."