Reviews of The Legend of the Kyubi

I only read a few chapters but I already don't feel like continuing, I see some people enjoyed it so maybe it wasn't my cup of tea, however i do have some problems early on and it might help you if you want to do another novel. First you mentioned their character might be a bit different in your summary, which is fine, your fanfic your rules. However I felt however you want to change the character Obito taunting minato was such a grade B villain move, its like "hint" "hint" Im someone you know "hint" hint"? Its like why? He's a villain, he's got a grand plan (at least I assume he sill does) and doing that could **** him over hard. People tend to forget minato is a genius who climb through the ranks as a civilian shinobi, no clan specialities or some shit. So it won't be hard for him to clue together so douchebag from his past came back to **** with him. Honestly that was stupid and didn't fit his character, he even went on about not killing woman cause of his past love, seriously!?! Why not just come out and say it instead, you basically dropped like the biggest hint. Another thing about characters is that you can say minato really did believe his son became the fox and went all crazy. The could be an interesting angle, however you seem to forget naruto wasn't important because he is the 4th's son, but he is a nuclear deterrent. All the tailed beasts were, so even he might hate his "not son" he is the hokage and there is no way he is gonna be ok with his nuke walking away. Cause literally one of the major reason that makes all villages aware of each other and not go full on world war is cause the major villages each have one. I can go on and on but I think you get the idea, I think the fundamental flaws of their character doesn't match their position in the story regardless of how you want to portray them. I think you'll be a better writer if you consider all aspects of that character, their job, age, etc... Anyway your story could've improved in the later 100 chapters, maybe but this was more of a writing problem than language or all those things. *Btw someone mentioned they were bothered by fox ears and tail, yea sorry have to agree. Not cause of aesthetic reason but the fact it is well known a fox attacked a village and no there is a person who is literally half fox is like a bright light pointing at an Jinchuriki which is not unless it is your vision to make konoha hate him as much as possible. Because remember it took all of naruto's ten something years until he was recognized by the village, and that was only cause he saved it. His bond with village was a very important aspect of his growth and having fox characteristics will make it even harder for him to connect to people. Don't know how you're gonna pull that off but good luck

I'm here to support author-san, as it is absurd that this incredible novel only has 4.3 in its rating 😤 I really don't understand. ..................................................................................

Okay, there are initial problems with the novel, I won't close my eyes to that, but... In a fanfic, I always look for fun, and I don't criticize the grammar too much, as long as it's readable. The point is, this fanfic is so much fun, I died laughing several times in it, and just making me have these reactions is a win for me.

actually first 10 chaps are not bad, you get some taste of what to expect, after that japanease words starts to get annoying, after 20 unreadable. story gets absolutely idiotic from some parts like evil minato, characters originally from naruto are completely different than we know them, its a chore to read it for me. dropping

I think the Author of this is not English speaking major as it had quite a lot of issues. I dont like the -kun and -chan in the names. I especially dont like the Foxy nickname and I think Minato's character just became something else entirely.

To many unnecessary japanese honorifics that it make the chapter cringe ..................................................................................................................

I have a question and it seems I can't get an answer any other way, is the Extra chapters side story or are they chapters that come after the main story like a continuation of the main story, I haven't read it yet I just noticed that it "ends" at 347 and I wanted to know if that was the end of the story or if the Extra chapters actually continue the story

it is a shame that I can't claim that the author (om webnovel) wrote this themself, howerver I am relieved to say that the time and effort put in to this translation (and eddeting the lesser written parts) paid of. It gives a new view of the Naruto-verse and does't follow the standart eddited version of the orrignal that most fan-fictions use. Over all I am greatly enjoying the book and am glad to see that I can still happily read the following chapters for a long time.

Hola de nuevo quería decirle que me gustaría que coloque Ben 10 en su historia de origen hay cientas de cosas y misterios que en la serie no se mensionan. también al principio de la serie Gwen, la prima de Ben, obtiene una runa mágica de bezel que aumenta la suerte. son 5 runas: la runa de fuego, la de electricidad, la de telequinesis, la runa de la suerte y la runa de dar vida a objetos inanimados.pero hay otra runa la ***ta la más fuerte, permite volver a reconstruir las otras runas si estaban rotas también aumenta en 10 todos los efectos de las otras runas y aumenta en 10 todos los aspectos del usuario . porfavor me encantaria Ben 10 en origen PD:algún día as una historia de Dragonball the gamer con la raza de buu no mucha gente lo hace

I'm not particularly a fan of teg Drama, but other than that, it's a great story, I think it's one of the best Naruto fanfics I've ever read, I'm looking forward to seeing how far it goes.

As the person who inspired me to write, I give 5 stars, this is a good story, the author also changed many things that were in the original novel, I highly recommend it.

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Great fanfic though grammar is debatable but overall great dunno why people hate this after all it’s free nd better than 70 percent of the novels on this platform.

Translation of huge Naruto FF into English. huge. 💊💉💊💉💊💉💊⊂二二二（　＾ω＾）二⊃ FANTASTIC Read! 💊💉💊💉💊💉💊💊💉💊💉💊💉💊💊💉💊💉💊💉💊💊💉💊💉💊💉💊

hmm,, some relationships are forced as far as i can tell, and i dropped it because i cant handle the cringe.. its like ,, engrish version of japanese words, made me cringe everytime man.. someone would shout " BAKAAAAAAAAAA' cmon man,, just write idiot there why hurt me, ive nothing against you. and the jutsus were written in english with japanese words,, idk man,, not my cup of tea, i prefer " fire style: fireball jutsu" instead of "katon: gokakyou no jutsu".. all in all, cringe killed me.

i cant believe naruto have fox ear and tail...this is abomination... you should write saiyan ff rather naruto

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Author i liked ur strory better than those shitty fanfics on wevnovel about naruto, who don't try get canon girls bcs afraid of messing strory while they don't relize they already did. 🙂 keep it up:)

Hola podría porfavor colocar la serie de Ben 10 en origen creo que podría encajar considerando que Hai seres que están desde antes de universo

I don't know what to say, I don't know if it's an ironic work that criticizes Naruto fanfic, if it's a pornographic work or if the author just smokes a lot of marijuana before writing