Review Detail of Victor_Weismann in The Legend of the Kyubi

Okay, there are initial problems with the novel, I won't close my eyes to that, but... In a fanfic, I always look for fun, and I don't criticize the grammar too much, as long as it's readable. The point is, this fanfic is so much fun, I died laughing several times in it, and just making me have these reactions is a win for me.