Review Detail of Orloss in The Legend of the Kyubi

hmm,, some relationships are forced as far as i can tell, and i dropped it because i cant handle the cringe.. its like ,, engrish version of japanese words, made me cringe everytime man.. someone would shout " BAKAAAAAAAAAA' cmon man,, just write idiot there why hurt me, ive nothing against you. and the jutsus were written in english with japanese words,, idk man,, not my cup of tea, i prefer " fire style: fireball jutsu" instead of "katon: gokakyou no jutsu".. all in all, cringe killed me.