Kirtirajput
The writing was a bit confusing at the start as many names were introduced at the same time. I couldn't imagine the setting and the characters fast enough, maybe because I'm not used to Indian names, and couldn't tell the exact gender whenever a name popped up? Or maybe because the paragraph started with a speech and introduction of the character later? Probably. Overall, the reading experience wasn't the smoothest, due to the things mentioned above, I had to reread a scene a few times to fix the initial images I had in my head. Like when the MC started to speak, I first imagined her as the chairman, then when the soft female voice was mentioned, I erased the chairman and imagined his secretary. What a shocker it was to know that she was in reality the CEO. So yeah, I had to reconstruct the scene in my head a few times, haha. The mood was set up nicely, I could imagine the feelings the characters portrayed through their speech during the meeting. Even though the scene suddenly switched to the first narrative I didn't mind as much, at least I got to know who is the Main Character. She gives off strong female vibes, which is only a plus for me. The switch between the tenses could be off-putting for some English geeks, but I don't mind as much. I can't tell much about the chemistry between the ML and FL, but from what I saw so far, both seem like very proud people. The dynamics should definitely satisfy some drama and comedy-seeking readers. Continue writing and never give up! Fighting!
Love it! The pace is pretty good, the relations between the characters are well-thought of. I can see the effort the author went thro in making the story so imaginative. The interaction btw the leads is so immersing, looking forward to more of it. The concise writing style adds to the cream of the book, making it a worthy read!
A very decent start from the first 8 chapters. I like the mc but I think it still needs some time to fully set the character...The most enjoyable thing is the interactions between each character...very smooth and natural so you will be eager to see how everything will come out. The world is still not presented that much so I can't say anything about it. All in all, I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work author.
I commend the author for giving a great beginning to the story and creating an environment that is well suited their story from the very beginning.. the discussion that takes places in the first chapter is definitely befitting of business structure and the concerns that would be raised in such a story.. the dialogue is great, the atmosphere is great but what I do feel is lacking the character design but all in all very good story.