Reviews of Star Wars: Skywalker

Star wars with Warhammer elements and harem not to mention the incredible writing and upload speed...What more could a guy ask for? -------------

Writing Quality 3/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 4/5 Character Design 4/5 World Background 5/5 Total score 4.2/5 Author tries too hard while writing the story, making it too wordy, its like reading a course book than a fictional story, which makes it somewhat boring. Another thing is to not include the details as much as compared to the actual scenes which are clearly lacking. All in all, it's a good story but clearly needs a lot of work when it comes to execution.

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Very poor grammar. Need to study more or recruit a translator(human) helper. The updates and background is good. The story development is ok but it needs some improvements here and there because from what I see there are multiple times where the same kind of information(or text if you will) is written over and over with almost no changes.

I tried to finish it. I really did. I saw that people said it was mostly info dumps but I pushed through the first dozen chapters that were just straight wiki copy/paste.The info dumps were just replaced by tangents. So many tangents. I would read a paragraph or two, maybe up to five then skim 2-5 paragraphs because it was just an unrelated tangent. The time line is unclear once he grows up. it says he was playing nice and slow expanding, but it seemed to all take place with one year.I will say, the time he spent with the Jedi, was written much better. not so many tangets, the story progressed well, and the dialog wasn't great, but it was ok.Once He leaves the Jedi, the story just becomes almost unbearable to continue. The dialog becomes confusing with most people sounding like robots with some sprinkle of "playfulness" mixed in.And so. many. tangents. that most of the time just repeat what an earlier tangent said. But I would say about half of the chapter would be a tangent you could just skip.

anybody that thinks this is good is a liar or a bot. this story has no substance, no development, no logic, and no natural conversations. the info dumping is the most well developed part of this story and even that is merely passing the time hoping to finally read something natural happening. conversations are nothing more than diction, no characters act like they have ever had thoughts about anything. every development is pure convenient for the mc. I've seen kids shows with more developed characters... don't waste your time, I read far enough in to know its never gonna be well written

it could be good but if theres three chaps in a row named the same then you will get the exact same info dumb three times in a row. the author also really loves making his mc far more overpowered then making him extremely passive at the same time. to be honest i dont have the time to explain why this fic isnt good at all

to many info dumps.... a few other people said it already but the author explains to much and often repeats the same thing whith diferent words..... got to chapter 230+ and its like the 3rd time there is an info dump about Duku and i just quit ..... i tried to finish the story 3 times but i just lost intrest .... a shame because there are ~40 chaps left.... but from the way it was written untill now, only content worth of ~5 chaps of the ~40 chaps is plot (maybe even less), and the rest are info dumps that you can read in SW lore....

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Na boa a melhor história que tô lendo até agora...muito bom espero que o autor na dropa essa fanfic pq ela é muito boa e ainda tem brecha pra fazer muito mais cap de boa...esse é uma das melhores coisas em Star Wars vc tem muito o que fazer

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Aku suka development characters nya. Teruskan cerita ini jangan sampai di drop. Aku kasih 5.0 untuk keseluruhan.................................................. .................................................. ..................................................

I LOVE THIS FIC!!!! DONT DROP THIS, PLEASE.

I like the story ......................................................................................................................................

Before the rewrite when this was a crossover between Warhammer and Star Wars the story was getting a little convoluted. Now that this is a pure Star Wars fanfic everything flows a lot better. The author seems to have a good understanding of the Star Wars universe. Some character interactions are a little unrealistic but overall ok, and I enjoy the longer chapters that this fanfic has. All in all a solid story so far.

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