Writing Quality 3/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 4/5 Character Design 4/5 World Background 5/5 Total score 4.2/5 Author tries too hard while writing the story, making it too wordy, its like reading a course book than a fictional story, which makes it somewhat boring. Another thing is to not include the details as much as compared to the actual scenes which are clearly lacking. All in all, it's a good story but clearly needs a lot of work when it comes to execution.
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