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Review Detail of The_Jeffinator in Star Wars: Skywalker

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anybody that thinks this is good is a liar or a bot. this story has no substance, no development, no logic, and no natural conversations. the info dumping is the most well developed part of this story and even that is merely passing the time hoping to finally read something natural happening. conversations are nothing more than diction, no characters act like they have ever had thoughts about anything. every development is pure convenient for the mc. I've seen kids shows with more developed characters... don't waste your time, I read far enough in to know its never gonna be well written

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